This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters. One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters. Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like. Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting. Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed. Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host. Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more. There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.
After reading a 1000 ch of this shit. I can say you will go through a rollercoaster of emotions whether you should stop reading this novel and keep wasting your ticket and vote for this novel. The grammar is bad AF. The world building is shit. The character is someone who has inferiority complex and an author who has a sadistic personality. Where others get strong really quickly and there is our mc who even though has many time gotten stronger can't seem to beat this people. The mc is a beta mc a character who lament on the choices he makes All I can say before wasting time and energy for this novel. Just read it somewhere else first. Just Google this shit of a novel you will find 1000+ ch for free to read .There are various sites to choose from. Don't waste it here. P.S. To the author if you read this.
Fantastic story and very interesting. I like the uniqueness of this monster training where the monster and the human fuse together and through this give bonuses to each other. This is a bit of a slower story. This is not a story that goes from being and ant to the ruler of the world in less than 150 chapters. I highly suggest reading it and bearing with the small editing issues that they author has at the start of the LN. He does start to get better at it around chapter 20 and then gets an editor to start editing it at about chapter 36. After that the editing gets really good.
The story had potential but the author pulls the same crap every time, no matter how strong the MC gets, and how many miracle encounters he has, everyone can get stronger than him at the same speed or even faster. Another thing, I'm not a native English speaker but the author's grammar is so bad I had seen MTL novels easier to read.
I don't know how this story has such a high rating, I have multiple books I read directly from authors websites where they publish their chapters themselves off any platform, I read several books from a couple random translators from writers who self publish on their own websites in japanese, and I read several books on here where apparently not a single writer has english as a first language, and this is by far the worst english I have ever seen, so many sentences don't make ANY sense, or have any meaning whatsoever because they are so butchered, I'm not willing to slog through when so many of the comments on reviews are talking about how terrible the grammar stays even past the 1000 chapter point, I sent a friend request on discord because I am a native English speaker, a writer myself, and willing to edit the story, because the base seems like it's an interesting story, I just can't tell for sure cause it's making my eyes bleed and giving me migraines trying to read it.
Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion. Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor. The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect. I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.
Grammar needs major reviewing including syntax, misplaced words and faulty proofreading (e.g. faulty words such as 'minister' instead of 'monster'). Please fix the grammar since as it is it is not worth going premium. Furthermore, descriptions lack depth and color. Needless repetition of simple words make the writing seem inept or deeply disrespectful to readers. Nonetheless, the story develops at an okay pace. There are no for the genre odd jumps in power and it is possible to feel how the protagonist starts understanding things better and develops his skills. Other relatively organic growth is seen as the MC gets to know more people and thus gets a better grip on both his immediate surroundings and the world. Interactions are often however bland surface level affairs, where little though seems to be given by the MC apart from if they gained something and if they like the other person. Rare is the moment when any reflections about motives are given. Speaking of motives, the MCs motives are a bland affair with little development. It seems like the author decided to do a Pokémon and just point them at a competition and then see what happens. That is fine for a start, but as the story progresses there is need of developing the why and the implications. That is not done. We see no added depth to the MC, nor do we see any growth. This is really too bad since the world the story takes place in seems like a marvel of magic and adventure, filled with interesting organisations with individual interests that still don't act like complete assholes. Additionally, the mix of magic and technology might make for interesting world-building and something to add depth to social structure (for example why are the organisations like they are), and it would be interesting to see a characters growth and exploration of this world.
This novel is not good because MC is not the main character he is just a average Joe in that monster invasion world he doesn't have any special quirks he is downright average . His age group cultivatied a technique to 10th level he will be only at 1st level. His monster is average,he is average, his family background is average, his friends are average , totally the book is average
I don't remember much as I read it long time ago and I thing I only read it like 20-50 chapter so u can say this is not a review but my deep shit frustration to this novel. 1) mc is a dumb ass bitch mother fucking 0 iq appshit.why? because he want to be strong and unlike some dick green head in some anime he actually work hard.and he got a good monster as price.now you all thing that's genuinely a good mc as he hard work and strives for what he wants right? no he reject the monster For stupid silver sparrow.now I don't know if this sparrow is transformed to some mighty phenoix or not in later chapter.but from what I remember this sparrows is the thotest thot a sparrow can ever be.she act like a queen but we all know she a bitch.if anything I will bitch slap that sparrow and drill it into the mc's ass. 2)what ever shit mc do he won't make any progress.i mean he actually gets strong superfast in some deep macho art that require being a masochist.but even after it he can't beat any bitch. more over he is in some deep shit relation with the sparrow I thing as he is a beta mc who actually get trolled by a freaking sparrow.not any heroine (if he got any.the way this story going he will gets ntred for sure)but a freaking sparrow.its like he won't even have a courage to **** a sparrow and teach her the place she belong but alas mc has dick that's smaller than a sparrows ass. 3)the whole world is weird for me.like the whole world is trying to NTR mc. you will get this feel when you read.like how much good he is on something but nobody cares.at the sametime some rich kid tried some half ass shit then here you go the genius of the century.like the world is trying to prove that mc is some mc of an hentai NTR manga.i don't like that wibe at all. 4)did I talk about the sparrow?she is a bitch a bitch that is born from bitch,for a bitch and all the bitch.by the bitch ,to the bitch and all the bitch English word could muster. and worst of all she can't even be usefull as a bitch.
Really tried to hang in there until the grammar got "better" at chapter 18. But it didn't... well it's less cancer than the earlier ones but it is still cancer all the same. Story wise it's your run of the mill trash mc becomes strong novel where he uses a training method no one else uses because it's "painful". Mc also has a supposedly "trash" monster companion that's a mutated version that'll in all likelihood turn out to be some hitherto unknown high rank monster that no ones seen before. On a side note: might pick this up again if editor gets his act together and fixes the chapters in the beginning, cause no one wants to have to wash their eyes with bleach after reading this novel.
This story is not suitable for human consumption. I do not understand why the author has refused to hire an editor. I assume it is because of insatiable greed as he can't bare to part with a single penny to ensure his work is understandable. Reprehensible. Furthermore, the author's personality at the end of the chapter really bugs me, constantly complaining about ranking or uploading chapters that just say there will be no chapter etc. I dropped it in the mid 90s and checked later chapters and the grammar did not improve. Concept is good and I should rate it higher in that regard but the writing is repetitive, grammar is trash and chapters contain little to no actual content, making this a giant waste of time that I can't consciously give anything more than one star. Readers, do not waste your time!
I read till ch 59 in this novel, I wanted to drop it way earlier than this but because some reviews said it gets better I kept going for a little while, of course it didn't get any better, aside from the grammatical mistakes, incomplete sentences, use of wrong words, the fight and sound descriptions are as bad as it gets, interactions between characters are very illogical sometimes, even the power system itself is not described in enough details. For what it's worth I think the premise is good but the author really needs to work on expressing himself better.