Reviews of Mmlllmmmllm

Hi there, I've decided to start writing. It's my first time so I'm looking forward to constructive criticism. Thanks in advance for reading, and I hope this Fanfiction will find a good place in your heart. ✍️

Wow i love this story this is the best classrom of the elite fan fic i ever read the only thing i hope for is for a litle harem and romance

Hopefully the MC isn't a pushover and shows some of his monstrous potential just like Kōenji did in the LN, I'm especially hyped for him showing off his physical prowess.

Koenji is like only second to Ayanokoji in terms of ability. He might even be better than Ayanokoji physically as Ayanokoji stated he himself wasn't sure if he was stronger in the LN. So I hope the author brings out more of Koenji's potential. This FF is great so far and I wish the author good luck in writing this.

I can't give a proper review since only 3 chapters have been published by the time I'm writing this so I will probably write one later when this novel gets more chapters. From the 3 chapters so far I can tell the grammar is quite nice and with little to no spelling mistakes, I cannot comment on the characters just yet but I look forward to it too. The only thing I have a problem with is that Koenji in the LN and anime got to school on the bus and it was an important scene for Kushida's character so I hope you could explain why it's different in this novel.

MC is a slave hypocritical wimp moron, his shallow, meekness, masochist, submissive, and pathetic personality would be more befitting of a helpless shoujo female MC or some beaten loser that licks his boss's boots with a yellow smile. It is disgusting to see such a worm taking the place of an awesome and interesting guy like Koenji.

This might as well be an OC. The characters add way different from the OG novel to the point they might as well be different people puppeteering their bodies. Moreover, I distinctly remember that Koenji came to the school by bus where hence we got the iconic scene. And really the MC taking over Koenji, it just robs the novel of one of its few very district characters. It makes the narcissist into a good boy, ripping his unique charm from the story.

I had the pleasure of reading quite a few chapters before it was abandoned. The writing was lovely, with little to no grammatical mistakes or mishaps. The story developed neither too quickly or too slowly, keeping you engaged throughout. The character design was nice, I enjoyed the minutiae details added about our main character and others as well. This was updated semi-regularly. Lastly, the world background was well expanded on with feeling like it was info-dumping. Overall this was a lovely story.

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13 Chapters in so an early review: Writing Quality: Great! Well-structured. Nice. Just yeah… great? Though I am a bit bummed that a certain conversation in the library was cut off :( 5 stars Updating stability: A stable 7ch/week. 5 stars Story development: Slow but filled with interesting events. I really enjoy the way it’s going. 4.5 stars Character design: THE standout part of this novel. He has all the qualities of Kouenji, without the narcissism... alright, well it’s still there, but not bad at all. An adult transmigrates into Kouenji and ACTUALLY acts like an adult. That’s one thing I really appreciated. If you are looking for a hot-heated idiot then do not bother with this. Our MC is calm, charismatic, and composed. 5 stars World Background: Too early to tell, since we haven’t delved into meeting second years but author has read until Y2V2 so I’ll give benefit of the doubt on this one. 5 stars. As you can see this is banging! Dig in my friends :) Q for Author: Romance? Harem? Love interests? Flings? I won’t give any spoilers away but I’ve read upto ch13 and it’s promising on that front. Anything you can divulge?

love this story it has manipulative,smart and decently strong mc. He knows how to play with other's mind and use this. "HIGHLY RECOMMEND"

Can't say too much just yet but I'm hooked from the 4 chapters I've been hooked. .

Let's see what we are talking about here. I'll come back to really note when the story is more developed. Don't give up and take heart. And also no harem please. Of course, romance is not excluded.

Why did you delete everything bro? Even if you wanted to abandon it, you could've left it as it was and not continued it. Sad I won't see more of your Koenji

please ,Sakayanagi for the win.......or no romance

good character development, I like the mc talent of reading people. It has great potential for developing the story.

Mr. author what happen? why did you decided to abandoned everything?

I have read some many Fics on this app and this is by far one of the best the characters all feel like actually people and the main character is smart but still a nice person I am loving reading this book and hope the author continues to write it.

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Awesome ff, really like the idea and enjoy the main character. Other character are also being developed nicely too. chapters are long which is awesome. Don’t droppp author