Reviews of Military System god realm revolution

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This story made me actually buy coin for the first time to continue reading it never did that before Finna spam now to post Snsjsnsiwiwksn sodidndjdkdnsnwoekd rneosneneonr disowned wisifnwosofneisocneisifnejdidjenxirnwixiensjxiejdnxieksncie

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I wonder if the author can share the raw, this novel is good and it is my favorite kind of novel about cultivation with a twist of modernism.

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this story/novel is interesting and has a lot of potential..I myself am facinated with the idea of modern weapons vs cultivation bullshit but the reason why writing quality is 2 star is because of so many grammatical errors(which can improve)I can understand that maybe this is your first book and English is not your second language but the amount of grammatical errors here are so many...Overall it's a great read you just gotta improve your grammar...

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it is a good novel, disregarding the fact that the mc has transformed the absolutist monarchy into a constitutional monarchy. besides that after chapter 40 the story gets very confusing, many different "POV" (it's not exactly a POV but it's the same purpose). and the main reason I gave it 3 stars... the "author"/translator demanding coins to read something that isn't even his own, I understand he spent his time on this and such, but it wasn't better to just do it a patreon? it is more profitable, as well as attracting more people to the story (who will donate more power stones, consequently improving income and overall rating) and also... it seems to have been translated by an automatic translator, since many times the sentences end up repeating themselves or getting mixed up

If you are looking for something like release that witch, but more advanced and not harem, with realistic mechanics? Then this is the perfect one.

The story has a good idea, which is executed well by the author. Always makes you want to read the next chapter without hesitation. However, really bad grammar (as expected for a translated piece of work), and really and really bad character design

is was a 4 star story, nothing was ground breaking and nothing (except the the translation) was bad. the ending felt rushed whether it was the axe or the author finished the story it was a good read.

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This is a great and fabulous novel. I highly recommend it for everyone and you certainly not regret investing time on this novel. GOD bless the author for such an exciting piece.👌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😎

The over all story is good The plot line Is also good….The writing is writen by a freaking 2 year old baby heck the baby might have had a better writing quality than the editor. if only they could have used an app or someting to edit thier story i wont hesitate to Give 5 stars

I was really excited when I saw this book I thought it would be like manga and anime GATE which in many ways it is. The inclusion of the system both slows down the action but also increases the political and technical parts of the book. The ML make some interesting choices in the begging which shows that he is focusing on more than survival but long term success. I generally really enjoy reading this novel its not up to a Tom Clancy standard but its still well worth the read if you like military and empire building novels.

the only reason this isnt a one star is because the update stability. I'll be honest this novel is worse than machine translation. it's like it was machine translated then made worse

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Champion, good story execution. everything is explained well why this and that happened. Many people are complaining about translations, but its nothing a normal functioning brain cant handle. They are just too lazy to interpret the message on a few gramatical errors because they are skimming through it.

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