I'm rewriting this. I have looked at many possible angles and futures that I can take note at but it's not just working.
Mc is too op. I mean why the fuck did I think that it was a good idea for me to make him stronger than most of the pro heroes.
I'm just being stupid. And I rushed the early part so hard, that I can hear my girl's dissatisfaction on how fast I was.
Anyways. I'm changing some stuffs in there. Probably try not to rush the pacing of the story. Keep the power levels in balance. Fix words and stuffs.
And yeah. That's about it.
See yah.