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MC's not part of the story

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Crows_Uzan
Crows_UzanLv1Crows_Uzan

This novel really matches the title, the main character is not MC but another character, MC is just a side person. 80% side character story and 20% about mc. so those who like to read about many characters who are not mc please read. Reminder mc is a stupid type and there is no character development, mc can live because of the help of others, and mc is useless he just fights and loses, and his friends or lover always protect him.

Lutz_
Lutz_Lv11Lutz_

the story is pretty good in the first few chapters, but after that the story gets worse. when compared to what I read in the synopsis and what the actual story was, it really didn't live up to my expectations. at the beginning of mc's story is quite promising, i think the story will be very interesting. but after a few chapters he meets a stranger and then the stranger threatens mc, mc gets scared and he becomes that person's dog. a few chapters later mc already mentioned the stranger who considered mc as a dog as a friend. mc is too jolly goofy in the story. and there's the stranger I mentioned earlier, taking advantage of mc and the girls around him. to be honest if this was written from that foreigner(Kyle) point of view, our mc(Mikael) would just look like a stupid underling and side character. but because this is from Mikael's point of view, but everything is coordinated and arranged by Kyle, so mc doesn't have his charm in this story. mc is just like a side character acting as a loyal dog to Kyle

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

I'm your first reviewer, the book is really good though it's still needs some improvement in it's grammar structure. I'm loving it and I hope it's a harem

Cabelinho
CabelinhoLv10Cabelinho

I honestly loved this story I really liked the plot also very well created, I really like two characters with a lot of life and story about themselves two background characters or friends of the protagonist,the personality is amazing, I loved him and the heroines a lot, now I honestly loved the heroines a lot and their personalities were well created

DaoistqO7KQL
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Neerajbapat
NeerajbapatLv4Neerajbapat

So far I have read 39 chaps, and it is very good. The character setting is good, the story development is good, it's a rare find in this mess of novels. I this one underrated novel ! Thanks for the entertainment author pujimaki!!

Bezelk
BezelkLv2Bezelk

I rate this full of 5, as I like the story flow. though I am disappointed because the updates were slow, I understand that the author itself have been in a difficult time management. I'm the second one in terms of voting power stones with the score of 20 votes, I really like the story.

Daoist240262
Daoist240262Lv4Daoist240262

I've read many of the novels on this site, I must say that I was tired of always reading the same story and I was no longer finding something interesting to read. But this book is different, it's not just another one filled with slaps in the face, I'm really enjoying it. Worth reading it's very good.

Lassana_Camara
Lassana_CamaraLv1Lassana_Camara

Franchement au début, l'histoire se passait plutôt bien. Mais après ça n'a fait qu'empirer. On a l'impression que l'auteur a plusieurs idées et il les met en place dans son roman ce qui donne pour résultats que ça ni queue ni tête. Y'as rien qui nous fait accrocher à cette histoire. On peut lire 30 chapitres d'un personnage secondaire tout ça pour qu'il tourne en rond. Franchement , l'auteur a besoin qu'on lui dise ce qu'il peut on ne pas faire comme un enfant.

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Daoisto5rYveLv11Daoisto5rYve

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eforos
eforosLv12eforos

Nice world building, good characters, the thing i dont personally like is the MC fetish on tsunderes, i'm on the 105 and the only they are annoying, and know he even turns into a simp... not counting the FMCs its a good story... hope it gets better and we dont get most of the interactions being him bickering with the FMCs

TakeruNobunaga
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sabi ko na pinoy e, potek hahahahahaha keep it up bro!!!!! ganda story....................................................................................................................................................

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