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Masters of Faith Medieval

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  • Character Design
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OmnipotentDad
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Hello Everyone, Author here, I`ll be pausing this Novel for now, I need to finish the 100th chapter of Supreme Martial System, And i`ll be continuing this together with Heavenly Sovereign on Earth afterwards. It's such a heart break for me, but i`ll continue this afterwards. Releasing three novels a day takes a lot of pressure, as I`m a Lone author, I hope you guys understand. I might come back here and update this novel once every now and then. But until i finish my volume 1 of Supreme Martial system, I`ll focus that first, only 22 chapters left! I`ll immediately update this two novels with massive releases don't worry.

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ThisGuyy
ThisGuyyLv12ThisGuyy

The sypnosis got my good novel sense tingling and a reincarnation vrmmorpg novel is great combination just like "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" and "The World Online"

Bulldog
BulldogLv10Bulldog

Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway. Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel. After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me. I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was. After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom. I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside. Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.

Panjif
PanjifLv13Panjif

good novel i love this i remember my fav weed from moonlight sculpture but its readable and thanks i love ur novel hope u will serious to this novle im your 1 fans ( @_@ v )

plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5plastic_doll

Author, with all honesty, your English is horrendous. You might not realize it, but the way you write is very confusing and many words are unnecessary. If u need me to list examples, I'll do so with a correction too. But I ignored that, since if I like a novel I'll read despite the hurdles. As for the story, nothing really original fyi tbh.. not that it's bad, I don't mind it. But everything is way too rushed, he becomes lvl 10 when everyone is 2&1, he doesn't even struggle killing the boss announced globally, just slash and hack, no dodge, no low health.. nothing no struggle. again, lvl2 vs lvl 15! And the CEO of the gaming company is kind to him, only kind. Yes, he offered on the phone to buy him a house, cars, pets, jets, guns and the world? And he did, the most expensive too! it's like he had a son that he now remembers? and when knowing the MCs linage(warring states era's leading martial linage), he starts crying thanking God for letting him know that the one they should serve is alive??? A cult?hmm.. What is this nonsense, seriously?.. he made 2 million $ or wtv in 2/3 days? If weed knew this, he would start killing left and right, kill himself at the end, revive, kill himself again, a loop. Oh and supposedly this isn't a harem okay? Fine even better. But noo, it can't be that dream novel?? where there's no actual harem, right!!!!??Yep u guessed right. No harem. But u look right, there's a girl "oh my so hot and cool, can I have a screenshot?" Everytime. Then left, oh not surprisingly another girl?!?? "sooo rich and handsome, if only I could marry him I will forever be happy". Idk wtv doesn't suit my taste, author I hope you improve and I sincerely urge you to check up on earlier chapters every now and then and not neglect keeping them up to date with your improvement. Reached chapter 20, couldn't continue on my injured soul.. good luck!

OneLetterBoy
OneLetterBoyLv5OneLetterBoy

The story is good and keep the good work for more interesting upcoming chapters, maybe slowdown a bit the progress of the MC it's kinda fast forward atlest put some small dialog in between.

sensitiveears
sensitiveearsLv5sensitiveears

I really enjoy this type of genre normally but I just couldn't read further. The chapters are littered with spelling mistakes, the dialogue seem forced and unrealistic and the pace is through the roof. I really wanted to keep reading but the writing quality is not good. 5/5 for updating stability though.

Gilhena
GilhenaLv15Gilhena

Reveal spoiler

Nightless45
Nightless45Lv2Nightless45

After this or before this get update can you work on these it a good book and on some site the author drop thsese novel that are good.plz do not drop these novel ok i want to read them again then go back to see if there update

Nightless45
Nightless45Lv2Nightless45

It a great book i am finish tho when i was on the last chapter i throught there was more so i click my volume down to go but when i try to click down for at least 1min i throught it broke then again i came back here and saw it was 12 chapter only.i was so hype good book tho.Keep the great Work Author

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

COOL👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😈⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🖖🤩🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

weetdix
weetdixLv5weetdix

The only challenge the MC encounters early on is walking to the store to buy a gaming capsule. Instantly becomes a millionaire and the top leveled player on release while spending so much time offline.

traveller_despair
traveller_despairLv4traveller_despair

Pretty great story with a great tale behind. Highly recommended for avid readers.If any errors found don’t blame the author but rather pity.A SINGLE MAN,A GREAT FATHER OF A FAMILY

Strv
StrvLv13Strv

Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development. As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.

Saarlink
SaarlinkLv5Saarlink

I can handle normal poor english but this is almost at the level of an MTL. The author clearly is uninterested in establishing his characters or his world as he skips over major events (discovering the MC time travels he is over it and knows exactly what to do instantly, the CEO of a company gives a random stranger an 11million dollar gaming machine for no discernable reason, and so on). If the author learns to use an editor and slows down enough try to tell a story with even slightly realistic characters this might be great. Not willing to waste more time than I already have to see if they ever do though.

Snake551g
Snake551gLv12Snake551g

I read all of this in one sitting. This novel is great plain and ******. Character design is done well. The world backgrounf os pretty well developed, and the story itself is a good light read with a nice plot.

FluffyButt
FluffyButtLv15FluffyButt

DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One hundred and forty characters later. DONT GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GrumpyGuy
GrumpyGuyLv5GrumpyGuy

Misleading title and genre tags, below average product. The writing quality is average at best - readable but with lots of mistakes. Updates are slow. Story is average at best, but too much Asian cliches of family love and care, too much of mutual respect and bond between high and low status people on the base of ... nothing. Main Character being overpowered is a common trope, but there should be a reason for it - even if a bad one, here is none. Characters are there, but feeling like cardboard target in a shooting range, it's not big deal if they were missing. The world is average compared to other novels, but lack building and explanation - basically - if you have read other MMOrpg novels, you should know it, which is a bad move in my opinion. Won't recommend, unless really bored or just wish to support the author.

Mr100Percent
Mr100PercentLv5Mr100Percent

I like the story.....keep writing 😀☺ please continue........I like the story.....keep writing 😀☺I like the story.....keep writing 😀☺I like the story.....keep writing 😀☺I like the story.....keep writing 😀☺

Neo_Cloud
Neo_CloudLv4Neo_Cloud

The story or novel is really dynamic, explosive and interesting. The novel progression and development is good as well. However, the characters background needs a little bit more to stability. There is a bit of a hiccup with the translation as well. I believe in time, you will improve immensely. I love your story, it really takes you to a dreamland of imagination and whatever you can enjoy.