Oscillating_Sine
Are you tired of sentences not making sense? Are you bored from non-witty dialog? Do you want to know what what it means to be charismatic? If you like these genres tagged to this story, you will be smiles every page of the way. There are chapter with such great cliffhangers you will be late to work/school. You will be heartbroken at the end due to the stability of updates. And you will overjoyed once you finally see an update. I hope you love this book as much as I did. Thank you Sine!
Characters seem to be a bit underdeveloped and inconsistent. They each have their hat and that's about it. Story advancements seem to happen all at once jerking the story forward whenever it stalls like someone driving stick for the first time. There's very little buildup if any and feels like story's going along then it's time for something to happen so it happens then its back to a kind of repetitive SOL till the next thing suddenly happens.
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