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Reviews of Mastermind: Genderbent Villainess

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Mastermind: Genderbent Villainess

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Red_Star_8250
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I would recommend reading this book if you like magic and a interesting male in a female body. This is a great book to read can’t wait for the next update!!

Nozz
NozzLv13Nozz

I'm a lover of all things that are Yuri book wise. Be it manga, fanfiction or novel, I can guarantee I have most likely read it. And more then likely on those novel occasions have I read stories because they had genderbent male to female heroine where they still like girls. Anyways I'm just gonna say that it's nice seeing more novel wise, and that I am looking forwards to reading more... On to the actual review!! Writing wise obviously there are gonna be mistakes as this book didn't come out long ago and most probably doesn't have a beta reader. Shown as the example of there being no beta when in one of the chapters a Penelope is hugging a Penelope in one of the carriage scenes between her and Tanya. With one of the Penelope's obviously supposed to be written as Tanya. BUT all in all its English and I don't have much to complain grammar wise and the mistakes don't occur much considering it hasn't been proof read. So not really gonna complain. Update wise as stated before the book hasn't been out long enough for it it have a reoccurring update schedule. So I've just rated it a five until further notice of future chapters to come. Stoty development... Who am I to comment on that when I haven't written the story. and different people have different preferences. So Ill just stick to the general factors. I myself am glad that you haven't spent a lot of time on the MC previous life before his death as reading about the past of them before they are even reborn into their new world I find to be rather activating, as they are just gonna die anyways so why waste the time writing three chapter up to their death scene? Ones enough for me! Pacing wise, pretty much skipped the childhood phase, but as I said preferences. I quite like it when the MC ages faster as it means the love interactions between them and future characters appears sooner. Character design... I LOVE THE MC AND THE MAID. but mostly the maid. As the maids personality is the type I like the most being cold and hard on the outside but when you push there buttons they don't know what to do and blush like hell. I can definitely say that character design is the is the stories strong suit. So nothing to complain about there. And finally world background. I mostly get it through snip-it's of conversation and the occasional paragraph which is okay. But compared to the characters whose personalities you can tell straight away through their actions which you have written. The world building is sadly quite lacking. It's like asking a character to describe where they live, but all they can do is say a sentence. So you know where they live and what the place is called. But you do not know what the place or the people that are in it, are like. But hey it's only 11 chapters in and has heaps of time to add more world building. All In all I like it and can't wait for more.

Jeremy_Kramer
Jeremy_KramerLv5Jeremy_Kramer

The story is fantastic so far. I love stories with these particular tags and this author does them the justice they deserve. Can’t wait to see where the story goes in the future.

NonexistanceRose
NonexistanceRoseLv13NonexistanceRose

It was very refreshing and i love the flow of the story keep up with the good work and i have read many stories that are almost like this but this makes me feel extremely excited about what would happen next.👌👍😆😆😆😆❤️❤️

Sorrest_
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I feel betrayed that the author got me into this book and hasn’t updated it in half a year.

Ruwa_3224
Ruwa_3224Lv15Ruwa_3224

I understand that the author won't update unless they get into the top 100 rank, but unfortunately people won't notice the novel unless there are updates. It truly is a shame as well, this novel is amazing and I have read every chapter that is out but it's just going to fade away without updates and remain unfinished. It truly saddens me that no one will never get to be able to see where this story will go and find out how it ends. I hope that someday the author will pick it back up again but one can only dream for so long before reality sets in.

Oscillating_Sine
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Please actually give feedback that I can use when giving a ‘negative’ review. Also, use the spoiler option if you are going to actually talk about the story, and make sure to actually get the story plot right. Listing what happens in the story and giving a one star review literally leaves me with no way of improving based on the review.

Lonely_Baka
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I want more TwT Update pls I like this The way it's written, the plot, the development, everything it's so good! Just lacking updates these days ig?

tinyspies
tinyspiesLv11tinyspies

Author pls come back and finish this masterpiece. The story is amazing, and i like how everything is under the protagonist’s control. Plus, the mc is a chad and actually stays true to their character, and doesnt act all nice because “oh im the protagonist so i must be good.” 10/10

crazedapplethief
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petition for author to continue writing this book please and thank you book is very many epic and deserves more chapters

krissparadise
krissparadiseLv15krissparadise

It's such a fun story it is completely unorthodox but it is entertaining. I quite enjoy it. The character development is novel but it has a sort of spark that makes me want to continue reading it. The subtle flirts and blatant overbearing 'prince charm' is a great characteristic for a female character....even if it technically a guy. I am very curious though if she/he will find either a ML or a MF in the end. It could go either way for me. It is a fun story so far.

Juto
JutoLv14Juto

Loving this novel!! There is finally a female lead who I feel has more independence (control) over herself. Most of the other novel are always rushing to shove romance in the FL face soon as possible (while often being on the submissive side) while the lead seem to take everything into her control deciding her own life as their is no random powerful person appearing too claim her ( if they did I am sure she will either pumble them into submission or scheme them into death) On a side not the write own whole is well done it gives a ratio of scheming and cultivation while maintaining slice of life style making one feel relax while reading. One big advantage I say this novel have over other is the MC Temperament. This FL like many others (ML and FL alike) is reborn from a old Emperor (Male) into a young Noble Child (Female) unlike most novels where.a powerful been gets reborn into child and other then their past memories that remain unchanged their personality and that process reverts to a child making mistakes that never sh pop uld have with their experience. This MC however maintained her identity, she did not let her past get to her head making much more mature and stable compared too others.

DaoistZUC6gE
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First things first, I must say that the way the author write is pretty good, it have a good grammar. Second, the story so far is really interesting, the construction of this world and it's characters I liked it too. This story is exactly what I was looking for! The MC die, is sent into another world, get his gender swapped (yes, his because I was looking for male to female), train hard to grow stronger and have pretty girls whose are madly in love with her (because he turned into she in this world). I supper recommend this novel, especially if your looking for an yuri, isekai with pretty girls and an interesting MC.

bcgamer16
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This is a great and funny story with the main character discovering something she (he) never did before. Also teasing and lewd moments Uwu :3. Praise our goddess Tanya.

Rvein
RveinLv14Rvein

to put it simply, if you're a fan of those genres that you see in the list...then this is for you, give it a try and you'll like it guaranteed!👍

BlueDragon13
BlueDragon13Lv4BlueDragon13

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

rizun
rizunLv1rizun

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Assyle0_0
Assyle0_0Lv3Assyle0_0

The story is very interesting how a man turns into a girl and became the leading lady of his life. Love the interaction between the characters.

Meowmeowpeow
MeowmeowpeowLv11Meowmeowpeow

The issue with this overall nice story to read are the character themselves. They are too dependent on the main character to actually get any real development. Interesting story and plot but the execution was not as expected.