shawn_anderson
Can anyone recommend me some good marvel fanfics? Preferably oneโs where the mc gets a harem (donโt judge me ๐) and is extremely powerful. At the very least equal to Thanos with all infinity stones or stronger. Reading weak to strong stories make me cringe since it literally makes no sense for an mc to meet a god then ask for some stupidly dumb wish that he thinks will make him strong just to get clapped by a side character ๐, I digress, anyways if you know anything let me know. โ๏ธ
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Kinda cringey. Many unneeded scene. Author seemed to want to parade many powerful figures even at the very beginning...when mc is literally just reborn and powerless. Need to work on story progression/ rationale more. And mc didn't feel like an introvert down-on-his-luck pharmacist. Not in his bearing, or thinking, or even speech pattern. He seemed more like one of those teenage hikikomori...
well this is not 5 star material obviously because of some cringey moments and prologue of this story . Prologue was too messed up seriously . I can understand witing is not essay because I tried so good work good story keep it up maybe after this ff your next one will be super hit. don't drop try to end this
Author here guys. I won't shamelessly give myself 5 stars I will let yall do that. I got this stories timeline and development mapped out. Nothing is actually written yet as far as chapters go. As I finish a chapter you will all get it as is most of the time. I am not perfect so I miss a few things here and there and I got a few helpful comments so far to help me out. Thanks for that by the way. Thus won't be perfect as far as some things might not make a whole lot of sense. Like him not talking to people at his job. Which was pointed out lol. I am going with the flow, I have a direction, I have a map. I just ask that you let a few things go by unless it's to huge of an influence to the story. I will try to do 2-3 chapters a night, atleast 10 a week. Thanks everyone!! WILLOW will be back.
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Finally I found gold here, it was difficult, I was afraid there was a harem but thank God the MC did not let himself be done by Romanoff, I love the fact that he drags the SHIELD with this knowledge he does not need them and uhhg I do not want to see Steve I'm perfect Rogers.I love the fact that Natasha can't spy, that's great. I can't wait to read more.