1 Rewrite

Hello again.

to be honest i was going to forget about this, but like 2 people didn't and that gave me motivation to continue this shitty story.

So I read through the chapters and fixed the things that i don't particullary like.

i'll upload the thiird chapter in 1-2 days, that's a promise. (though i doubt anyone cares for how long i was gone)

Goodbye.