nice story .can u please upload more chaps per week?
the only problem that comes to mind is that it's bit slow paced but i like it
One of good MCU fanfic and uniqe. Others maybe dislike passive MC, but I quite like that idea. Keep planning behind the scene and protect his GF and people he cared about.
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simples mente envolvente a cada capitulo melhora to curioso para o proximo ta chegan do as melhores partes para ler continuar a subir mais capitulos
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Writing quality [5*] - Well... I can't say it's good in the few early chapters, but as it progressed with each updates, it gets progressively good, to the point where I can visibly see visible improvements as I read further down each chapters. Although I could understand, as this a translated book, so it would really differ a lot after conversion in English from its true meaning, but all in all, I could say that it's still one of the best translated novels out there that wouldn't make your brain tap out in plea. Story Development [5*] - Hmm... As for this one, I could say that the MC is placed a bit on the supportive role and just let the story progress on its own, as it's Marvel with multiple superhero interactions sprouting here and there, aaand he's building himself up so its natural. Of course, there's no way MU would just watch and let our MC accumulate resources. The story started with Iron Man, spoiler alert! Not at all; Everyone knew it all started with him. Nevertheless, at the point where I'm reading, I could say it's within my satisfaction so far. Character Design [4*] - Now this is a bit tricky... As far as I'm on the chapter, I could say that the MC is a smart one, no edgelord vibe, a bit secretive, but it's still in his development phase on his overall personality so for now, so far it's all in the positive side. Update Stability [4*] - Hm... I guess its a meh for me. The translator of this fic, that guy is a bit and quite a little hardworking IMO. So kudos to him in translating this fanfic for me, whoever that guy is. Anyways, updating stability is 1-2 chapters per day, and the chapter bonuses still weren't included, obviously. World Background [5*] - Marved Universe ATM.
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okay i was super surprised by writing quality because usally when i find " translated " novels its horrendous enough to make my head explode in pain, now the problem with this novel . . .. well i only got a few chapters in peter parkers personality really leaves a bad taste try it out your understand or you know wont. oh yeah he summoned his mech jumped off hit building and started flying around and got surprised people noticed it. a shiny golden mech flying in daylight with no care in the world. . ANYWAYS can read chinese fanfics you can most likely read this because it one of the better ones. so far
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Cool! Cool! Cool! Cool!
yeah you deserve 5 ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️ and i really hope you keep updating ... 🥲🥲🥲 sadly to say because a lot of fanfic dropped including my own creation ....................................
Was loving it, unique take and the frog interactions were cute, till the new webnovel policy hit. Now I can't read it here anymore. Could you please crosspost this on scribblehub? Thanks
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