Lordyyy
It shows great potential in general, with a little-known multiversal background and a clear long-term motivation, with that said the main character has a few chapters but it's a bit strange, as if it wasn't very consistent with his status and experience, something that it will get better with character growth as long as this isn't one of those easy achievement stories, which it doesn't seem so far.
DO NOT READ THE PROLOGUE. author took it from another story (with permition) But that doesnt means he knows the character well. If you read the prologue, it will set high expectations which you Will be very dissapointed in 2nd chapter after prologue real Quick. He acts like a kid tourist which gets him in the bad situations. He talks about using his suit everytime something happens which he doesnt needs to, for we to know he can handle it with powers he gained.
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The story is going great. The main character has just started his journey and you can see that he's a bit psychotic. I hope he moves beyond that a bit, not enough to change his character entirely but like to be more appreciative of any woman he gets. Excited for the future of this story and I have a feeling it'll exceed my expectations.