CORNBRINGER
La historia me gusta bastante y tiene mucho potencial pero tiene un inicio dificil pero agradable asta que se estanca en un alargamiento de metas y enemigos en donde se retrasa el desarroyo del personage y se siguen agregando elementos sin concluir ningun objetibo planteado y posteriormente cambiandolo. Sinceramente creo que el autor esta indeciso con como seguir la historia y simplemente agrega sus ideas sin desarroyar nada asta el final como cuando terminas actos en una serie, bueno seria como aceptar todas las miciones del juego y ir aciendolas todas de apoco pero decartandolas en el camino en lugar de terminarlas antes de avansar yo creo que seria mejor que se planteara una direccion y la siga asta el fin y luego de ahí continuar.... suerte con la historia.
To be honest, I've been enjoying all of Cornbringer's fanfics until now. The only problem I have with almost all of them is the fact that they aren't long enough. Aside from that, they're all great. Anyway, this is a five-star from me. The common problem I usually have with most novels on this platform is the dialogue. It's well done in this novel which kind of makes me happy. The fighting scenes are well described even if Cornbringer could put a little more details, it's still satisfactory. There hasn't been much world-building until now, but It's only been 19 chapters, so I'm waiting for that. (I'm a heavy thinker and I love everything related to world-building). This is my review! I hope it helps new readers to get into it.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Writing Quality-4 Updating Stability-2(5 months) Story Development-3(It seems like the static system is just too much(for examples intelligence), and the plotlines of the story feel forced). Character Design-2(just reading the novel shows). World background-3(no person is mentioned who should be important). =2.8