MARVEL: GAMER PATH

The goat CORNBRINGER is back

another corn fanfic here we go again [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

he put a pay wall behind the final chapters so unless you want to pay for his Pateron do not read

Writing is great story development is good too but feels like it will get boring later character design is pretty good, the author nailed fury perfectly hehe just don't like where the story is heading for some reason it feels boring. But maybe that's just me

I really hope he gets the canadian super soldier serum that made sentry and he fixes it and uses it mixed with the other super soldier serums....................

all this effort and time just to drop the story

Coming here as one of the many AO3 writers that are being harassed by spam comments insulting their work. It is unprofessional and embarrassing. I'm sure this comment will get deleted like the other negative ones but people should stay away from webnovel.

Just FYI the rest of this story is on pateon only. This seems to be a The new normal now.

i normally likes cornbringers novels but this on is garbage to be honest. the grammer is terrible, you can not follow the story of you have not seen the films as half of the plot is missing so you just have to Guess what is happening as the chapters are not connected well.and the plot is soo much forced that Chinese novels feel more real.

Writing Quality-4 Updating Stability-2(5 months) Story Development-3(It seems like the static system is just too much(for examples intelligence), and the plotlines of the story feel forced). Character Design-2(just reading the novel shows). World background-3(no person is mentioned who should be important). =2.8

When it’ August 15th and there’s no chapters 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

La historia me gusta bastante y tiene mucho potencial pero tiene un inicio dificil pero agradable asta que se estanca en un alargamiento de metas y enemigos en donde se retrasa el desarroyo del personage y se siguen agregando elementos sin concluir ningun objetibo planteado y posteriormente cambiandolo. Sinceramente creo que el autor esta indeciso con como seguir la historia y simplemente agrega sus ideas sin desarroyar nada asta el final como cuando terminas actos en una serie, bueno seria como aceptar todas las miciones del juego y ir aciendolas todas de apoco pero decartandolas en el camino en lugar de terminarlas antes de avansar yo creo que seria mejor que se planteara una direccion y la siga asta el fin y luego de ahí continuar.... suerte con la historia.

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The story is awesome the best part is that characters don't seen one dimensional..Most fanfic have side characters that are written as if they live for the MC's sake...Over all great writing quality...Story development is great...Update stability character design are awesome as well....

Pretty good though i think that the whole xmen arc was very very very forced and very much unnecessarily dragging, but overall the story is good.

AMAZING JOB the BEST marvel fanfic. please just dont drop it. For now the story is amazing, also interactions... just dont drop it and continue the amazing job. NICE.

To be honest, I've been enjoying all of Cornbringer's fanfics until now. The only problem I have with almost all of them is the fact that they aren't long enough. Aside from that, they're all great. Anyway, this is a five-star from me. The common problem I usually have with most novels on this platform is the dialogue. It's well done in this novel which kind of makes me happy. The fighting scenes are well described even if Cornbringer could put a little more details, it's still satisfactory. There hasn't been much world-building until now, but It's only been 19 chapters, so I'm waiting for that. (I'm a heavy thinker and I love everything related to world-building). This is my review! I hope it helps new readers to get into it.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

I keep getting insulted and spammed by bots with advertisements for this on my own writing. Speaking with others in my community I know they’re getting spammed too. Predatory, shameless behavior. Illegal, too.

you deserve it, wasting my time reading unfinished novel, and decided to make a new one before finishing it. typical author always burden themselves make a new one before the previous one is finished. Truly pathetic