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This fanfic is recommended to me by my friend. Did Tony Stark transmigrated into Alex Krown? Or is Alex Krown the mc that discovered an usual game that would transmigrated him into the marvel universe? Anyway, the first two chapter were very enjoyable to read. not a huge marvel fan though. Don't drop this, Keep going!π
This fanfic had such potential, it's a shame the author insists on nerfing his MC... The general idea at the beginning was very good and appealing however as the story progressed it became clear. The author too seemed to insist on doing boring stuff and uninteresting fights.. So I couldn't force myself to read past chapter 50 and just dropped it, maybe if the author decides to write another book fanfic of marvel I hope you can do it better.
first of all everyone is racist or against a stereotype by nature. don't believe me? for example IF, I repeat IF ...If the MC is set as a pedophile/communist then people who dislike the idea of a pedophile MC will have a hard time reading the writing. So this type of writing will limit the range of audience who can read your story. like me I am really against putting a certain race/country as MC's background. It really hurts me to imagine a hero/villain that wobbles his head as means of communicating because this is almost a fact as 99% of Indians do that as it is their culture. When you as a writer decide to use a certain race/country that has a stereotype you must understand that 'stereotype' exist and how it can effect the reader's experience. Just imagine if the MC is transmigrate to bollywood universe and he is a half-vietnamese , where his father is indian but his Vietnamese mother is set as a control freak with traditions. I highly doubt that it will attract any in indian readers because of the difference in culture.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.