Debasish_padhi
Lovin it!! The story is heading towards its moral steadily, with very interesting events, and ideas that were implemented, the chapter upload seems to be quite decent, world building is not that bad, the writer is obviously improving himself which is noticeable. Very excited with how this story is going.
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Well, the story is good and my rating in this story signifies what is lacking First, it lacks details like when two people are talking that is not identifying whoβs talking to who kind of a thing. Second, the details in explaining is a little much and makes me bored. Thats all! The story is great in terms of development cause the MC is responsible and is willing to take risk to become strong and goes to the next level of his path.
Writing quality is bad. There are some chapter in which the author tries using proper grammer (probably with the help of some software), but a lot of chapters are just straight up horrible, and barely readable. From sentences that make sense and weird random words in places they don't belong, to flipping back and forth between first and third person perspectives and weird tense changes. It's all in there. The writing quality makes this novel hard to enjoy. Only give this a try if you're not really bothered by poor writing quality. Besides that, from what I've read, things all seem like a fairly generic xianxia novel. Nothing too special, but also not horribly boring.
its Chinese novel to the boot. I dont feel like there will be anything new in it. I wont bother trying. what gave it away was the fact it started with clans and the mc is genius apparently and got crippled and instead going to war like regular Chinese senior brother father grandfather ancestor or whatever. author gave mc background as a rejected person because he is now crippled despite being son of head. why?I dont know. Chinese brain circuits works in mysterious ways