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I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches. It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.
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First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP βI cultivate everythingβ setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently) To the author let me say good story, keep writing and Iβll keep reading.
As someone who caught up to the most recent chapter , this novel is decent . it has a great concept but its poorly executed. This is the type of novel you read when you are bored and dont think too much into what you read. Also the fight scene are below average at best. The concept of laws were annoying. The author keeps mentioning laws but never explains what they are or how they help in battles. There are different levels of laws but its never explained why a heavenly law is better than an earthly laws. All we know is the heavenly laws are better and thatβs it. The avatar art is never truly explained . All i know is that he makes avatars and the benefits are increased qi reserves, improved comprehension speed and the all share the same mind, so they are share the same techniques. But whats confusing is how they are made and why canβt high level Martial artist tell that the person they are talking to is an avatar. Also when the avatars cultivates their bodies, is the same benefits shared with the rest of the avatars or with just the main body. Like i said great concept , terrible execution . READ ONLY IF YOU ARE BORED.
novel is quite interesting, the fact that he has a lot of clones that have conscience helps in making him more op. also i quite like his character, ruthless and domineering. he's a unique mc out of all the novels that I've read, since there were mc's out there who are also ruthless and domineering but these mc's rely on something that made them that way like for example, system cheats or some kind of powerful plot armor that changed their character in a not so understandable way, in short its illogical an example is when a a guy was suddenly reincarnated from modern society and has never seen any killings in his life was able to kill in cold blood and wpupd emit killing intent when he only killed a few people in the early chapters while in this novel it is well explained how he became ruthless and domineering ir tyranical in character. my only problem for this novel is the update stability so author is this still updating or is this dropped already?