Reviews of Martial Arts System

Good Novel I hope the elf ends up with Ichiro and not as Azura's best friend because I would feel very disappointed. That is just my opinion .

First things first I’m only like 30 chapters in so take what I say with a grain of salt. Okay now that that is out of the way, this is a pretty good story, it’s obviously not perfect but is a million times better than some other filth on here, and apparently it gets way better after chapter 40 or so. It doesn’t reinvent the wheel but it does a bang up job on what it’s supposed to be. Good job author

I had my reservations about this book but seeing that it was limit free i decided why not. An honest review would be to say that the first 50 chapters are mid tier at best. But from then on it only got better and better. The book captivated me so much that I binged the whole thing in one sitting as well as all the privelage chapters. My advice/TLDR? Give this book a fighting chance. :)

I absolutely love the story and the characters! Please keep up the good work, thank you!

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I love Martial arts or Murim style manhwas and Cultivation novels... This was a great read although i hated the romance part too much for me it was cringy... And after waiting for more than a year i doubt Author will continue this novel. If he did i do request him to fix or even end the romance part entirely...

Great read hope the author picks this back up

why did u cut this novel short its so good plzzzzzz start this back up again

I really enjoyed this book and if you see this I would love to know when you might start writing this story again

Excellent book, I binged it in about a day Sad to see that it’s dropped but understand that sometimes when u lose the appreciation for your work it’s sometimes impossible to get back However to any super fans out there why don’t you contact the author and ask for permission to continue it yourself but let people know the who the orginal author is

if you may continue this one I'll be grateful ,among all your works this one is the best

Good story, can see some issues here and there, but nothing that makes it not enjoyable. worth the time, hopefully will continue it via fast pass

it's literally the best martial arts novel I've ever read

it will be good if i read it more and more 👍

Great story line and great theme me personally am very attached to martial arts and this just inspired me to keep fighting

I love this story and was reading it when you were first writing it a long time ago now. I wish you would start it up again like you said In the final chapter but it’s been a long time so there’s no helping it now. My only gripe with the story is that it no stop talks about how handsome or pretty the two mains are, literally telling us how handsome he is every chapter for 400 chapters.

I have to be honest, the first 40 to 50 chapters were not to my liking but then the story started to grow, it made me get attached to the characters and I was very entertained with the fights, it's been a while since I read it and it was because of her that I was so interested in other works by the author, the most recent being "Martial Online" and it is already possible to see an incredible evolution in the author, I hope to see the end of ichiro's story.

i just hope author get's his motivation again. I'm really hoping to further read this novel, although there were some mistakes but i like the story progress and love to be again part of it......

A work that has an old concept, but somehow new. Extremely funny and that connects you with the different events and situations that are imposed on the MC's path. Also, I'm not good at reviews, but I highly recommend this novel, it's just iconic.

Amazing but way did you stop ? Will you continue it or not ?