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Martial Arts System

Alekzi

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Snapplemonkey
SnapplemonkeyLv15Snapplemonkey

I understand the author didn't like working on this story, but i prefer this one over white online 100%. Never got bored reading this, even though there were some grammar issues.

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frasanaa
frasanaaLv4frasanaa

when will the second part will be updated?.....................The Novel is great...........................................................

omomom
omomomLv15omomom

reading up to chapter 19 , it felt like the story is a description of an anime episodes . —————————————————————————————————————————————————-

Izomatic
IzomaticLv12Izomatic

It was a very good book so far I hope he continues it in the futur I enjoyed every seconde

Dj7dust
Dj7dustLv13Dj7dust

this is a masterpiece and I hope author-nim lives a happy life and continues to grow

Abubakr_Abdulazeez
Abubakr_AbdulazeezLv14Abubakr_Abdulazeez

really good novel when is chapter 433 going to be uploaded or has the author stop the novel[img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Arturo_Mejia
Arturo_MejiaLv1Arturo_Mejia

(N/A: El capítulo 174 ha sido cambiado, es un capítulo sobre la visión de la chica elfa. Después de todo, ella no será la amante de Ichiro, sino solo la mejor amiga de Azura, he escuchado muchas sugerencias y decidí cambiarlo. , entonces Ichiro tendrá solo 1 y ese es Azura) about martial arts this part is good, anyway the romantic plot made me drop, especially the above

CandyInTheTrunk
CandyInTheTrunkLv11CandyInTheTrunk

Hahhahahahahhahahahhhahhahhahahahhhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahahaahhahahahaha……….Hahhahahahahhahahahhhahhahhahahahhhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahahaahhahahahaha……….

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2ndLv13KObracali_the_2nd

I think the author did a really good job with everything I’m Already almost at chapter 50 and I had a really good time reading it. To me this book is a hidden gem.

Anand_Pratap_Singh_3048
Anand_Pratap_Singh_3048Lv3Anand_Pratap_Singh_3048

i beg you bro please start working on "Ghost Rider in Twilight" again please i am begging you bro first time in a month i got intrested in a novel but got backstabed because it was last time uploaded 1 year ago please start working on it again please..........

Adam_Alexson
Adam_AlexsonLv15Adam_Alexson

Well written. Solid storyline. Finished with ability to continue.

Chocula_
Chocula_Lv11Chocula_

What happened to the book? It was honestly quite fun even though it had some rough moments. hope you continue it later on, will check out your other works though.

Ultimate_Boss
Ultimate_BossLv4Ultimate_Boss

I like how the story started with him growing in strength for the first few chapters and how there was an entire arc for him coming to terms with the fact that he didn't steal anyone's body, especially how he then became a teenager mentally only that he had memories and experiences from his past life. Cause in some novels in similar situations there is always that age barrier between the MC and their peers and rarely any character development to break through that barrier. So I'm happy with how the MC developed

Retrion
RetrionLv15Retrion

Very solid and quite entertaining world and story. Sad to see it go into a hiatus but understandable. Awaiting authors return to this novel. Hopefully one day...

KingQuinnJack
KingQuinnJackLv3KingQuinnJack

Definitely 5 stars! I love the story and it keeps getting better and better. I love the new cover, too! The author updates the story daily with at least 2 chapters.

Arvin_harris_sabri
Arvin_harris_sabriLv3Arvin_harris_sabri

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GG_Igor
GG_IgorLv3GG_Igor

I am very grateful to the author for deciding to focus on Azura and Ichiro's relationship and change his mind about Ariel and the harem, when I read chapter 174 I was very desperate thinking that the romance I love would be broken and when the author changed his mind I felt such a relief that I can't explain it. This novel is my favorite right now and one of the things I love is the romance of Azura and Ichiro, no matter what people say Azura and Ichiro are my favorite couple and I'm really looking forward to seeing their development. Author, thank you for creating this work and this couple, thank you very much.

PurpleDao
PurpleDaoLv13PurpleDao

Hello author, *SPOILERS & DETAILS* So I have started your story a couple days ago and I think overall it is pretty good as the first book you wrote. In fact better than many books that may be an author third story. I can see the time and effort you put to update stably and form a background for the world we are reading. But, I think the MC is just moderate, his maturity considering his previous life level of stature taking into account how he even has a legacy is a little low though. I get the 15 year old now, 16 year old mind affecting his mentality but it's still meh to me. Like how he does some shameless* things or interacts with friends like Lucas... 😑. I feel like some characters could have been fleshed out better or show that MC still interacts with them. As of 296 which is where I am, I don't feel like MC remembers or communicates with his family or friends like Lucas or Sylver (spelt his name wrong I know). Especially considering how those are things he seems to value. I think it would be nice to see him develop his friendship more with his teammates at the High School of Fighting. More sparring, more team bonding. I was also a little put off by how soon he moved in with Azura, I think there relationship is more obsession than love, personally and Ichiro is the one really contributing. Like I don't look down on her but Ichiro has made her better, even bettered her life, risked his life and it looks like you foreshadow in the future she will be a Grandmaster of his technique, she didn't have to go through a test a nothing. ( Yeah she's his girlfriend but still...ugh to me). She hasn't shown great personality or possible development. While Ichiro would still like her before, he knew about her powerful dad or she was weak, I think it's really her beauty first rather than personality. Then they went to the final stage so soon -just 16- and in a love hotel 🙄😅, honestly thought it was a bit funny. I mean I think he should of met someone when he was still weak or when he was at the top, like the elf girl. Azura kind of knew oh he has great looks and limitless potential. I think the idea/plot that they are at war with the beasts that's completely overlooked or rather obscure. I think even common people should be aware of the dangers but it like they aren't. Personally I think it would be great if you clarified how techniques or development before the age of growth does use energy in the air but the age of growth is a more distinct process. Like at the age of 18 a hidden channel in the body opens or something like that you know. Finally, the most important thing is, the fights and the Martial Art scenes, those are spectacular. His energy and mentality when it comes to fighting is personally what has kept me so far besides the other issues and why my rating is still so high. The fight scenes get my blood pumping, heart racing and even cheering when he wins. The details and thoughts are all amazing in my opinion when it comes to fighting. And how he triumphs when it's unlikely is even better. I must say that I'm so thankful for the story because it's been interesting and great at times. personally I think if you took this story right now and rewrote it could even be better. But it's your first story so I hope to see even better in the future 😆. I'm not sure if I'll continue reading but I'll see. I mean I have noticed the improvements along with the way.

MorningStar00
MorningStar00Lv4MorningStar00

please dont make harem Azera is enough plz plz plz plz plz ......................mmmm..............m.jjssjsjsjsjejsjsjsususususjsisusuusksjsksks

MilkGod_disciple
MilkGod_discipleLv3MilkGod_disciple

This novel is so good. The story has amazing plot, the mc barely relies on the system, unlike other novels. Includes romance (no harem) which is slow paced. Also has a ton of action, good action and amazing arcs with varied characters (very funny) 10000000/10