Andreb_author
Heyyah dear readers! Shameless author review! ππ I would like to leave a review of my story. 5/5 of course. I can't say this story is perfect since I am still improving my skills in writing and giving my best to satisfy my dear readers. There is a lot of wrong grammar contained in this story. Iβm still exploring what readers really like and trend genres. I know others might be bored because of the author's poor update on the story but we, the authors, it wasn't easy for us either. We are doing our best to update a chapter daily. I'll be glad and accept your opinions and genuine reviews on this story. Adding and voting on this story is highly appreciated. Please be patient with this poor author here and support me and my story until the end. Love lots from Andreb_author ππ€β€οΈ
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I don't know what to say, but this story is so underrated. It must have been more than 1k views. I hope the author could wi the WSA 2021 CONTEST. I'm calling all the attention of all readers out there. Please let's give this book a support by adding this to our library and voting. Giving review and reading it. Our support is a great and big help to the author..
hello! you recommended this to our promotion account, and i had free time, so i decided to check it out. i have read the first chapters, and i would like to suggest that instead of introducing the characters like you did in the first page, try doing it by creating a scene where they interact with each other, and show their personalitiesβnot by listing their names and enumerating their character traits and personality. people would call it βlazy writingβ, although i trust that you are anything but lazy. the first chapter lacked depth. the characterβs actions and words felt hollow and rushed, that it almost felt like it was the point of view of a robot. good luck on that contest!