Same over powered self insert slop youll find Everywhere else. By chapter 5 the Author has trivialized everything that could come after. Thro in the standard necessary evil dumble jerk and rich orphan tropes and you have managed to squeeze an absurd amount of unoriginallIty.
fits my taste buds i love this piece of art very well researched, i love the detailed magic plot is interesting overall, one of my favourite
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I like how the character develope into something amazing and the chapters where she faceslap some annoying people it's really satisfying and great work author-san..
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All round very well written story, I saw some call the story cliche earlier which made me laugh as this story goes off in the most weird and wonderful way. The MC herself is well written and consistent as is the pace of the book, it runs into slight speed bumps when it goes into some flashbacks (?) which do feel to clog up the flow, however ultimately they are important to the story so we know the interpersonal relationships of our MC and where she is at, as a person. Plus they remain well written and it is interesting to see how they were changed to fit this AU.
dang. i seriously underestimated this. first 3 chapters seem rushed, but it gets exciting after tht. author put a lot of thought into this and the world background is as good as it gets. :)
you know what I truly like your novel one of the best read I have ever. that mordred trick today was making me impatient for next chapter. experience is speaking. you truly know how to attract readers. all good complimentary words will be short for novels I m taking too much. peace ✌️. first time giving 5 stars . I m very picky when it comes to giving stars.so you can understand how much I like this novel keep writing. other than updating stability I can't complaint about any other thing.
good story Great work, I really like it. I especially like WBWL-stories and this fits right in. Just keep the updates coming, this is one of my favourite fanfictions on this site at the Moment! :)
This story is an amazing retelling of an age-old tale, and an astounding amalgamation of multiple series, or at least pieces of them. the main canvas of the MCU and Wizarding World of Harry Potter are excellent, while the added ingredients that i've found so far are superb.
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This is a really nice story. *SPOILER* I think it would be even better if you went in to more detail about her time in the past. I feel like you gloss over a lot of details and situations where you could've made an impression. It would've given us a chance to grow with her as her power develops, you know? But other than that I really enjoyed it. Thank you for for the amazing work.
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