Magic Shop System

A very hot head and a very weak MC who has no control over his emotions.The first thing he does after transmigrating is not to understand the word but falls for a adult women buy thinking through his lower brain.

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Amazing story and developments, but slow Chapter Release.....I NEED MORE!!!!!!! Tell me how I can help more chapters to be released.....we need more chapters please and thank you.

this gives me vibes of cultivation pet store and astral pet store(though cultivation pet store is a copy of astral pet store but the former has now taken a

He got a special system...he didnt know function....he was threatened by system. Due his transmigration he had to do everything to save his soul...he got underlings, closed to his sister, became from loser to something else...and his system brought him suprise....everyone could use only one element, how about to use more than one? And if you go on journey, take your home :)

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Overall a good novel but it has the standard translation errors and some other annoyances that shouldn’t exist like butchered sentences some statements that don’t have anything to do with what was happening

The story is well written (although the setting is similar to some other novels). The beginning was slow-paced and had very little character development and world background(which is still a lot lacking), but the story progression was fine so no complaints. The MC sometimes acts like a dense-headed Dunce who lacks a presence of mind but it's funny that way and his situational awareness is good. Since the system is a shop type the business aspect felt a bit lacking since it was mostly used to suppress powerful people and also it is a lot less talkative and doesn't help much( asking a low IQ MC to figure out its functions on his own is like asking a newborn baby to walk) The magic and spell system and world background and development leave a lot to be desired. Let's just hope new worlds are not introduced when the MC has not even explored the 1% of his current word. All in all, I like it and was worth reading. (Evaluation after reading 163 chapters)

Writing was good. Concept of story and the way scenes were executed were also good. Nothing much to criticize, except for the story been very boring and plain. It's like eating nicely steamed and cooked bowl of plain rice everyday without any curry or side dishes. very boring.......

I hope you start updating more frequently cause it will die out without any new chaps jfjdjdjbfbbbfnncbbuevcyrcbyrxbcisbcidbcidbcidcbdicbdix

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great novel so far and hope you can update faster or at least keep the same speed . vvvvv. f

Great novel. Would recommend to anyone.

I read initial chapters and the plot is really interesting which grips you to read more and more. definitely people should give it a try. well there is wizard......I like fantasy theme novels and this one will definitely be good as far as I can say . Good luck author .

As the person (prob) who first read this in its draft stages, I can proudly say, it has gotten a long way since. The author had racked his brain and dashed out these nice chapters. So you are gonna say, “System, magic, etc. So cliche.” But, think about it. Nowadays, nothing isn’t cliche, just that little difference, that little change, the unexpectedness of what how your tracing of the story might be wrong, these small differences make it interesting, engaging, and fun. Now real review: as I said I have long since read a couple chapters of this novel and it’s really good. The Mc isn’t dumb, the novel didn’t start with an uncaring Mc, the system’s limits on the user and the threat of death of he doesn’t do as it says before the timer ends make it fun to see if he will make it in time. And the Mc’s attachment to the family and listening to them as they care about him is also very nice. To not spoil I’ll stop here. **: I highly recommend giving it a try and helping the author via: powerstones, comments, reviews, or coins if/when the novel becomes contracted.

This one is actually easy to read. The MC is a genuine guy who while he has his moments of stupidity are very few and each character is well developed and there is no super annoying chick who comes along mid way to completely destroy the feel of the story. It’s well written with only a small amount of grammatical errors. All up- really happy with this story.

Lol his soul will die ? I didn’t even bother read it cause Mc will just be a puppet for the system or some god 😂

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Don't bother starting to read this book. The author already abandoned this novel

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