Asmita_Mukherjee
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I really like the way the story is going but there are various grammar mistakes the author keeps making. For example, the placement of punctuation marks. Hereβs a small lesson. A. [βWhere are you going?β, she asked.] this is not correct. If you have a question mark in there already, there is no need to have that comma there; itβs implied. Correct examples: 1. βWhere are you going,β she asked. While this is not my favorite way, it is correct. 2. βWhere are you going?β she asked. This makes more sense to me and is also correct. The same theory can be applied to exclamation marks. The second issue Iβve noticed is that the author combines words that shouldnβt be combined. Or rather, that have certain times when they should or shouldnβt be combined. For example, βI had better get going.β This sentence is grammatically correct, though some people may also say βIβd better get going.β This is also correct. However, author sometimes has a sentence where combining βI hadβ is not correct. An example is: A. [βIβd that ice cream flavor a while ago.β] That isnβt right! While it may seem correct because youβve seen occasions where itβs been used that way, it really isnβt grammatically correct. Hereβs the correct way: 1. βI had that ice cream flavor a while ago.β There are a couple more minor details (like the usage of emojis and &s) but I wonβt get into them. This seems like a whole boatload of criticism for this novel, but NO, IT IS NOT. I have enjoyed this novel immensely so far and am looking forward to future reading. Thanks for coming to my Tedtalk.
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I'll give a brief character sketch of the characters. My POV is really great π Alice (FL)- Cute, childish, talented Daniel (ML)- Charming, caring, considerate, playful Eddie (find for yourselfπ)- Sweet, helpful Jake (find out yourself)- mysterious Lin- confused persona The rest are Lady Vixens. Don't mind me ππ
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I'm writing again & another review for this author. I must recommend this novel to everyone. It's a bit different than the other romance fictions β€ The ML is cute & loving while the FL is sweet, mischievous & naughty!!! ππ I'm sure anyone who reads it will fall in love with it ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
Hey i dont know u like to read the review after every chapter but i feel like saying one thing or two every now n then. Though m not a writer but still... Firstly there is still room for ur improvements cause till now you are doing great. M just curious to tell u that in most of the Korean dramas n novels they depict men to be reserved n u know how u r showing Daniel .... Make ur creation a different one a handsome n jolly people do exist n they r respected n afraid of bcoz of their post or position. Secondly i really like reading u so release at least two chapters sometimes π π thanks and all the best dear.
Good going till now....but ... Lets be frank if they knew each other n loved each other backthen.... then meeting after 6 years they were simply professional .....surprised they controlled their feelings. How will their love fly in the air like ti see that soon .Apart from that if she betrayed him for dads dream then that should be quite a good reason ...but now she is destroying it so make it count for her good as well .... Hope u understand what i mean. Thank u. All the very best