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Luka's Story(A Monster Girl Quest Novel)

A reimagining of the original Monster Girl Quest story.

Adam_Herman_0268 · Video Games
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What, there's more?!

Hello, my name is Luka. But you already know that, and you already know all about my crazy adventures, over two full lifetimes and now I'm starting over yet AGAIN. I imagine you must be sick of me by now. Well, good news, because this story isn't all about me. I'm not going to regale you with tales of the same encounters yet again. Instead, I'm going to tell you how what should have been the most straightforward story didn't quite go as planned. You see, even if you're a goddess, a true goddess, your plans can and will go wrong.

Ilias slowly ascended the mountain in her male form, which she called "Elias". She sweated and grunted as she climbed, hoping it would be over soon. She hadn't come to this mountain range to work out, after all. This was a reward for working hard for her creation. Eden had even suggested it.

Ilias' male form was weak. Pitifully weak. In her hated loli form she could ascend mountains better than this. But the arduous ascent had two purposes. The first was to continually remind herself how her creations lived. Now that she knew what pain felt like, what hard labor felt like, she decided she should never allow herself to become a stranger to such sensations. The second reason was to work up a good, manly sweat, so as to attract her quarry. And her quarry was smart, so it had to look good. Lamias were often capable of detecting disguises. If Anastasia didn't believe Elias was truly a man, she wouldn't come. The smell of masculine sweat was irresistible to almost any monster. A man that easily climbed a mountain without sweating would only attract the stupid monsters.

Ilias frowned as she reached a fairly level area. Looking around, she saw no sign of Anastasia. She sighed a manly sigh. She'd badly wanted a lamia to eat her, especially the beautiful blonde Anastasia. Not only was Anatasia one of the most beautiful lamias in existence, she was also one of the most sadistic and vicious. Which was just how Ilias wanted it. Oh well, if Anastasia wasn't taking the bait, there were always anteater girls, bear girls, less attractive lamias, or…. Goat girls. If Ilias was desperate. At least they had tasty milk. Hmm, maybe that would be nice. The goat girl could pleasure her while she sucked on the goat's nipples.

Ilias turned just in time to see Anastasia slithering towards her. The goddess had also shut down her omniscience, relying only on her human senses, in order to be even more convincing as a human. In a split second, she was completely wrapped up, her male body pressed up against the naked upper body of Anastasia.

"My, but you're a handsome one!" Anastasia exclaimed, squeezing tightly. "A very suspicious one as well! Almost as if you were trying to get caught! Well, you're caught now! I'd suggest you surrender before I squeeze you to death!"

The squeezing was a weird mix of intense pain and pleasure. Ilias hated pain, but the pain was being caused mainly by the lamia's body wrapped around her, which was intensely pleasurable. She was soft in all the right places and even her snake portion felt nice. A typical man would surrender to a lamia immediately. Ilias intended to behave like a typical man.

"I… I give up! Just please…. Don't hurt me anymore!" Elias pleaded.

Anastasia loosened her coils, maintaining the pleasurable contact with her body but not squeezing so hard that it hurt or made breathing difficult. Ilias took the time to look at the lovely lamia more closely. For Ilias' money, she was even better looking than Alice. Alice was exotic. Anastasia was what a lamia would look like if Ilias had made her in her own image. And if there was one thing Ilias loved, it was herself.

"See, that was easy," Anastasia said approvingly. "Now just relax and I'll take care of everything."

Anastasia unbuttoned and removed Elias' pants, exposing his already rock hard member. Anastasia's jaw dropped so low it was as if she'd disengaged it.

"That…. Is that even possible?!" the lamia shrieked. "It must be over a foot long! And so thick!"

Ilias certainly hadn't designed it for mini monsters, that was for sure.

Anastasia slowly stroked it with her abnormally large hand. The large hands with long fingers were a key feature of Anastasia's particular subspecies of lamia. Ilias sighed at the feel of it, so easily wrapped around her huge penis.

"How do you carry this thing around?" Anastasia asked. "It looks so heavy. You picked the right girl, hero. If there's anyone who can properly pleasure this thing, it's me."

Taking Elias to the ground, still loosely wrapped around him, she brought her face to the tip of his penis and began to wrap her tongue around it in classic lamia style. The tongue snaked from the tip to the base, twisting and coiling slowly. Ilias was overwhelmed. She was no stranger to pleasure anymore. But this was the first time she'd experienced sexual pleasure from a man's perspective. Sure, she'd been eaten by the roper, but that had been quick and perfunctory, and had involved her entire body. She had barely even noticed her penis during that experience. But now the lamia was focused entirely on it, and she wasn't eating it, but pleasuring it.

Ilias had expected this. Lamias were intensely sexual beings, almost as sexual as succubi. She expected to get drained quite a bit before being eaten. What Ilias hadn't expected was how different it would feel as a man. Having a monster's long tongue inside her, squirming around, had been one of her favorite experiences, but this was even better. No wonder men loved blowjobs so much!

"You like that?" Anastasia asked. "I'll make it feel even better."

Anastasia produced even more tongue, completely wrapping up the bottom six inches of Elias' penis. She put her mouth over the head and began bobbing up and down over the remaining eight inches. Ilias felt the head of her penis repeatedly hit the back of the lamia's throat. She felt the sucking sensations, all while Anastasia's tongue stroked the base. Oh, men had it better indeed!

"Most men would have come several times by now," Anastasia mumbled. "But I'm glad you haven't yet because I'm going to swallow your penis whole now. I can do that, since we were made to swallow entire humans. A penis, even one as large as yours, is no problem."

Anastasia uncoiled her tongue and swallowed Elias' dick in one motion. Ilias felt her dick go into an even softer yet tighter place, with a strange texture. Oh yes, this was definitely better for a man! Having something inside her was pretty amazing, but being inside, having her sexual organ surrounded by soft flesh…. She understood very well how men were so easily overcome by pleasure like this.

Anastasia, feeling Elias' cock begin to twitch uncontrollably, concentrated her tongue and lips under the tip, so that she could taste the delicious semen. As Elias began screaming in ecstasy, semen shot into Anastasia's mouth. And then something happened that had never happened to Anastasia before. She began gagging, overwhelmed by the sheer force of the explosion and the amount of it, which filled her mouth in less than a second.

Ilias watched with satisfaction as her semen exploded into and then out of Anastasia's mouth. Ilias had wanted to make sure her creations were fed well. She hadn't just designed this penis for size. It was basically a semen cannon, ejecting five times a normal male's ejaculate. Ilias decided she might have to recalibrate. If it was too much for a lamia to handle….

"Wow!" Anastasia said when she was finished with her coughing fit. "Really tasty, but I was caught off guard there! That's okay though, there is more than one way to feed a lamia! I want to see what that monster feels like inside of me! It's gonna be tight, though! Lamias are unique in that our mouths can take a lot more than our vaginas."

Shifting her body, the lamia forced herself onto Ilias, causing her penis to plunge deeply into Anastasia's soft pussy. Due to her cold blooded nature, it wasn't as warm as Ilias liked, but it wasn't cold either, and she knew it would get warmer from the friction.

"Oh!" Anastasia exclaimed. "I can't believe how good you feel. I might have to keep you!"

"No!" Elias protested. This wasn't the plan. Anastasia was supposed to eat her! Not that Ilias couldn't just free herself at any time, and the sex was amazing, but she really wanted to get eaten.

"You're right!" Anastasia said cheerfully. "I'm really hungry anyway. And I just love how you taste."

Satisfied, Ilias relaxed and enjoyed it as Anastasia's vaginal muscles ran through technique after technique. Lamias had remarkably strong and flexible pussies, preferring to use muscle contractions alone to drain men rather than the more typical pumping, in and out motion. Ilias had also designed this Elias form for endurance. While there was no refractory period from being made to come by a monster, sex wasn't all about orgasms. Being able to stay a long time at a plateau was what really made for a great experience, and Ilias had gifted herself that ability.

Apparently, her abilities needed calibration in that respect as well. Anastasia abandoned her wonderful lamia techniques in favor of simple pumping, her breath becoming ragged, sweat starting to appear on her brow. Elias' penis was getting the lamia hot and bothered, to the point where she was closer to orgasm than Elias was.

With a shudder, Anastasia squeezed Ilias painfully as an intense orgasm racked her lamia body. And then Anastasia collapsed, her coils loosening, her head resting on Elias' powerful chest as she hyperventilated. Ilias received a strange feeling of satisfaction at having conquered the predator simply by laying there. Unfortunately, she also hadn't come yet. Oh well, no problem, the lamia would resume pleasuring her in a moment. Any moment now….

Anastasia began to snore. What the fuck?! Ilias thought. She had made sure that her male form couldn't cause critical ecstasy! Argh! Only the second time out with this body and she apparently had bugs to work out. This just wouldn't do. How to handle the situation? Shake her awake and ask her to get on with it? No, that's not what a real male would do. What would a real male do? Ilias knew what she wanted to do. Her penis was still inside the lamia. Ilias wanted to turn Anastasia over and screw her missionary style until she got satisfaction. Would a man do that? Maybe. But what if he knew he would die if he did so?

Hmmmm…. What's the quickest way to get eaten in this world? Ilias thought. Ah, I know! Act like prey! Prey wouldn't try to take advantage of a sleeping predator by fucking her! Prey would try to escape!

Slowly and carefully Ilias began to squirm out of the sleeping lamia's coils. Best to make this look good, she thought.

"Alice, there are no ghosts here!" I exclaimed. "You don't need to stand so close to me!"

"I'm not standing close to you!" Alice protested. "You're standing close to me!"

I needed to change the subject. Not that I minded Alice's closeness. It was just that we were on a mission, and we needed to move quickly, before the foxes got hold of the bell. Clearly they were ahead of us. The traps in the cave had already been triggered. I'd already defeated one fox girl and expected to encounter more. There were also other dangers in the cave to worry about.

"I never properly thanked you for bailing me out in my fight against Granberia," I said. "I was overmatched there. Badly."

"You did surprisingly well," Alice replied. "Actually, I expected you to win. Would have been nice if you did. I didn't like having to reveal myself that way."

"I wasn't that close to winning. She was beating me soundly the entire time."

"But it was taking a long time," Alice pointed out. "Those other heroes fell in two seconds. You survived against her for almost ten minutes. You even cut her once. I probably shouldn't have given you Angel Halo so soon. Granberia was determined to know where you got that weapon. My appearance became necessary to explain that."

"It's amazing how you managed to get her to back off," I said gratefully. "You must be pretty high ranking to be able to order a Heavenly Knight around."

"Yep. Pretty high ranking."

"So do you know the Monster Lord?" I asked. "Are you a general or something?"

Alice looked as if she might retort that I was an idiot again, but she stopped herself, probably realizing that I had no way of knowing anything about how monsters at high levels organized themselves. Of course, we all know that the only one above the Four Heavenly Knights is the Monster Lord. But I didn't know that, and she knew I didn't know that, so she let it slide.

"Yes, I know the Monster Lord," Alice said as we continued, her fear of ghosts momentarily forgotten. "In fact, the Monster Lord might be closer than you think."

"Is she in this cave?!" I exclaimed. "Is she after the bell too?!"

Alice stopped and stared at me. Now she was definitely going to say something rude. She never got the chance. The only warning I received of an imminent attack was when her eyes shifted upwards. Alice had been so absorbed in dealing with my idiocy that she had missed the spider girl on the ceiling. Her weight hit me the next second and I was borne to the ground. The spider girl began to busily wrap me up. Alice stood by, impassively. She'd promised to help if I was overmatched. Apparently an ordinary spider girl shouldn't be too much for me to handle. After all, I'd just gone toe to toe with a Heavenly Knight and performed impressively. Despite me being taken by surprise, I could do this! Reaching for my sword, I alternately slashed at the spider girl and the silk she was trying to bind me with.

Ilias began creeping away from the slumbering lamia. This was turning into both a revelation(penises feel really good, she thought!) and a disappointment(I really wanted to be in a lamia's stomach, she pouted.)

Fate must have been listening to her, which seemed strange to Ilias since she hadn't created any kind of force called "fate" in her new world. Whether it was blind luck, or fate, or a higher power than even her watching over her, she stepped on a twig. The lamia woke with a start and before Ilias could even react she was wrapped up again.

"Trying to escape, tasty morsel?" Anastasia said wickedly.

"Please!" Elias begged. "Have mercy!"

"The way you were intending to have mercy on me, with that sword in your hand?!" Anastasia countered.

"I cannot tell a lie. I confess I was an unbaptized hero trying to kill you," Elias sighed. "I guess the only fitting punishment is to be eaten."

"Take heart, hero," Anastasia said sweetly. "The fate you intended for me was horrible and painful. Your end will be unimaginable pleasure. It's an ethical code among us monsters. We hate physical cruelty. But I am a lamia, and we have another code: no hero must be allowed to survive to hurt weaker monsters. So prepare yourself, hero. May your goddess be as kind as you believe her to be, because you'll be seeing her soon."

Ilias felt a pang of guilt just then. She'd watched countless heroes die this way, and had simply let their souls pass right by her, into the next world. She hadn't kept her promises. She was grateful for the chance to create and rule a new world. This time she would keep her promises, and then some. Not just to her heroes, but also to the monsters who had lived good lives and didn't deserve to have a hero hunting them. Of course, in a month or two Luka and Alice would put an end to humans and monsters killing each other, which would make Ilias' job a lot easier. After all, Heaven wasn't completely ready yet. She'd have to check on Eden's progress when she got back to Heaven.

She'd been so absorbed in rare self reflection that she'd missed the best part about getting eaten: staring into the wide open maw of the beautiful lamia, getting a preview of where she would be going. By the time she'd started paying attention, her head was already penetrating the lamia's throat. Unlike Alice, who had little experience devouring human-sized beings alive and had to take it slow, Anastasia had swallowed quite a few men in her time. Ilias was swallowed in only two mighty contractions of the lamia's throat.

At first she endured the uncomfortable sensation of being upside down, but as she hit the curve of the lamia's tail section she flattened out, laying comfortable on her stomach. She really wished all lamias would swallow people feet first instead of head first. It felt better for the man to go in feet first and it was less disorienting. But some lamias really enjoyed the kicking as the man went down, plus the head was the hardest part to swallow. Once the head went down, the rest quickly followed.

But that was all water under the bridge. She felt an intense love for Anastasia as the stomach squeezed her and the digestive juices began to do their fatal work. Anastasia was making Ilias feel incredible, and it was hard not to love someone doing something like that to you. Ilias knew that many men had felt this same emotion while being digested. It was, after all, an extremely intimate act.

Ilias sighed in pleasure at the feeling of the juices and the persistent squeezing of the stomach along her entire body. The roper had been more intense, at least at first, because the roper didn't swallow prey. It held it in place while dissolving it. That meant the roper needed to work faster. It's juices were far more caustic than normal digestive juices. A lamia, on the other hand, at least a normal one, had a stomach more comparable to a human's. It would be quite some time before Ilias died, at least thirty minutes if not an hour. The feelings were already amazing, but would slowly build in intensity, causing her to have orgasm after orgasm, nearly continuous towards the end. At first the orgasms would be limited to her genital area, but they would spread over more and more of her body as the process advanced to its inevitable and deadly conclusion.

Ilias changed back to her default female form. While she found direct stimulation of a penis to be more pleasurable than direct stimulation of her lady parts, the female form was far superior for experiencing whole body pleasure, and since there was no ejaculation, which became uncomfortable once the male ran dry, her last orgasm would be as pleasant as the first one. Ah, yes, that's what I wanted, she sighed to herself. The digestive juices were attacking her breasts as well as her genitals. The next orgasm would be felt in both areas. This was going to be by far the most pleasure she'd ever experienced. She closed her eyes, since she couldn't see in the darkness anyway, and concentrated on how amazing it felt. This was going to be the best hour of her long existence.

"Ilias!" Eden's voice said in her head, jarring her out of her euphoria.

"What the fuck do you want?!" Ilias yelled back telepathically, enough to cause Eden discomfort if Eden could actually feel discomfort. Unfortunately for Ilias' remaining sadistic streak, Eden had fully recovered her divinity.

"Goddess, you ordered me to keep an eye on Luka and Alice while you were…. Out of the loop," Eden replied.

True, Ilias had given that order. The goddess had felt that she'd be more fully immersed in the experience of being pleasured and eaten if she wasn't fully aware of anything but her immediate surroundings, reliant only on what she could sense with her human senses. It was too hard to focus when you knew everything. But that meant she couldn't keep track of Luka and Alice.

"Ugh!" Ilias said in frustration. "Give me your report!"

"He's dead, Ilias," Eden said. "Or at least he will be in a moment."

"Dead?!" Ilias exclaimed in disbelief. "How the fuck did he die!? He's still on this continent! The only thing that would have been likely to kill him here is a roper! Was it fucking roper?!"

"No, Ilias, it was a spider," Eden reported. "It was a very unlikely situation, but it happened. He's going to need time turned back for him and probably an evaluation."

A spider!? Ilias sighed again, this time with irritation rather than pleasure. She'd really hoped Luka would only start getting killed on Sentora continent. And hopefully not even then! Since she could control the power levels of the beings on this world, having created it and all, she'd made all monsters, as well as humans, significantly weaker than they had been on her original world. Basically, she'd set the world to Easy difficulty so that Luka could win every time. But alas, this wasn't a video game. Even against easy opponents, freak accidents or careless mistakes resulted in death. Her amazing day was going to be cut short. She sighed again. Luka and Alice better be grateful for all I'm doing for them, she thought bitterly.

"Alice…" I gasped. "Alice, please don't just abandon me."

Alice appeared next to me. She bent down and took my hand in hers. "Why would you think I'd abandon you?"

"Didn't you say that you would leave me without hesitation if I lost?" I asked.

"I…. did I say that? I don't think I did. No, I definitely didn't say that. And why are we even talking about this?! You're dying, Luka!"

Indeed I was. It was a freak event, although far from a freak accident. I'd freed myself pretty quickly and was easily overcoming the spider girl. And then in an act as cruel as it was petulant, the spider girl had sunk her teeth into my neck, injecting her venom into me. It had been an act as foolish for her as it had been fatal to me. She was faster than me and she had a clear line of escape. She could have run away as fast as those eight legs would have carried her, but instead she'd wrapped her arms around me and bitten me, allowing me to thrust my sword into her and seal her. THEN she ran away, in her little sealed spider form. I could have stepped on her easily, but I'm just not that guy.

"I'm dying?" I asked, although in my heart I knew it. But Alice's confirmation removed all doubt.

"Yes," Alice answered. "The venom is coursing through your veins right now. I'm a monster. I have no means of healing your and I don't possess any antidote. Nor would I easily be able to get an antidote. I'm sorry, Luka."

"Will it hurt, Alice?"

"Quite the opposite. The venom is going to liquefy your insides. You're being digested from the inside. It's going to feel absolutely incredible. And I'll be with you until the process is complete, okay?"

"Thank you, Alice. I don't know why it got into my head that you'd just leave me. We're friends, right?"

"Yes, of course we are," Alice said, tears starting to flow. "It's strange, though. I have an incredible memory and I sorta remember saying that I'd leave you if you lost. Maybe I did say it? But if I did, I didn't mean it. I'm here and I'm not going anywhere until you die."

"Well, it's been a short but fulfilling journey, Alice," I said, feeling the venom really begin to kick in. "I'm sorry I screwed up."

"You didn't screw up, Luka. She was just hateful, doing what she did."

"Please don't hurt her, Alice," I begged. "She was only doing what she evolved to do."

"I won't hurt her, but she's not getting her meal. I'm not leaving you here. I'm taking you back with me to my castle and you'll get a proper burial. It's the least I can do for my first ever human friend."

"I love you, Alice. I wish we could have kept going longer. I really wanted to see how all this turned out."

"I love you too, Luka," she sobbed. "I don't even know why, I just met you. But I do. Luka?"

I had felt it, and Alice had evidently noticed it in my face. The venom had started to really attack my vital organs. The sensations were unbelievable. I was ejaculating uncontrollably into my underwear.

"Alice!" I gasped. "It's so…..!"

And then there was oblivion.

Oblivion was pretty short, all things considered. I guess time has no meaning when you're in oblivion, but my consciousness snapped back. I couldn't tell if a second had passed or a million years. It felt like both.

Although I was conscious, I was still unable to see anything. I was still feeling intense pleasure all over my body, but strangely the feeling was on the outside this time instead of the inside. And then a voice spoke into my face.

"Luka, oh brave Luka…."

"Ilias?" I asked, staring off into the void. Usually in my dreams she appeared in pure white light.

"I'm literally speaking into your face right now," Ilias replied.

Huh. I was feeling her sweet breath on my face, in my nostrils. I felt around. I was inside a soft, warm place, and something, or someone was on top of me. I felt a back, then moved my hands down and found what was distinctly a butt. A very nice, curvy butt. Mmmmmm…

"Luka, focus!" the voice in my face yelled. "You died! I'm going to tell you how to not die again! At least not to the same monster."

"Wait, did you bring me back to life?" I asked.

"I did, and furthermore, I'm sending you back in time to the start of the battle you lost. That's how this whole thing works."

"Am I going to remember any of this?"

"Only my advice," Ilias answered. "And only subconsciously. But you still have to listen up! Can you focus for a minute! I really want to make this quick! In case it wasn't apparent, I'm in the middle of something here!"

"I'm listening," I said, although whatever was happening to me in this strange place was making it hard to concentrate. It felt really good, all over my body. Ilias' body on top of mine wasn't helping.

"A spider is no match for you, so you don't need advice on fighting her," Ilias said. "But apparently this one's a sore loser, so you need to protect your neck at all costs! As well as any other part of your body where there's a good vein! Basically, just be ready for her to go for the kill when she seems to be on the verge of defeat. Got it?"

"I think so," I said. "So are you going to send me back now? I get another chance? Thank you so much, Ilias! I admit I was never a follower of yours, but I always respected the faith except for the monster part and…"

"Shut up!" Ilias shouted into my face. "No, I'm not sending you back yet! You interrupted me during a very important….er… meeting. So I'm getting something out of this! And since you won't remember it, I'm going to take all the liberties I want."

I felt a hand reach for my penis, positioning it, and then I was inside her. I wasn't sure why I recognized the sensation. I guess I knew I wasn't a virgin, but I had no actual memory of having sex.

"Ilias!" I gasped. "What are you-?"

"Shut up and just be still," the goddess ordered. "Oh wow, this is amazing! We're both covered in digestive juices! Those juices on your penis are inside me! Oh, Luka!"

Ilias began to move as best she could in the confined space. She wasn't kidding about the digestive juices enhancing the pleasure. We were both dissolving together in…. in where? What was the goddess doing in someone's stomach? And why was she having sex with me?

When the orgasm hit me all the questions were swept from my mind. Ilias began to come as well, her walls tightening around me, intensifying my own orgasm and then leading into a second one almost immediately. Her lips locked with mine, her tongue exploring my mouth, her hair all over my face.

"Luka, vis is amaving!" Ilias exclaimed. "Oh shib, my tug is dissolbing. Hee hee. I can tok o mo. I guess dis is bye bye!"

And with that, I was back in the cave, fighting off a spider that had ambushed me. I remembered nothing, yet felt strangely confident that I would prevail against this monster.