IrisSky
Sorry, I just saw that I didn't give the review. From the synopsis onwards, I was full of curiousity. And still now I m curious about how the main characters life change with the coming of my most favorite character of the book (I won't tell the name). You might feel that it's a normal love story but that's bcuz the author has very well played with the words to confuse the reader but if you try to read it. I m sure you will get so engrossed in the storyline and would want more and more. I can't help myself I want to read more and more. I know the author is new but the story is worth it. [img=recommend]
Disclaimer: I only write negative reviews, because I think it's not helpful to write what went well. The stars will reflect my opinion on the novel. Advice; flesh out the companies a bit more. It's just generic company here, and somehow all the people in the story are successful. Download gram marly to catch minor grammar or punctuation errors. You have a lot of those. I think the romance is too fast paced. Remember that while we feel initial butterflies, what makes us love someone are little things like how they are focused on something, their unique quirks and their likes. For now, all I get from the romance is: Alexander finds Eve hot. Eve becomes dumb in the presence of Alexander. Oliver likes Clara. Clara is innocent bird that is getting abused. I think it'll be better if you made the love a lot more meaningful. I won't say that there aren't cute moments that do show love, but as of right now, I think the love could be a lot deeper. For example, there's this novel called When The Butterflies Came, that I loved. The leads fall in love because they have fun times together. Quality time- that and working together and helping each other, are two of the main qualities for a successful relationship. (along with trust and honesty). The villains (I'm assuming) are neither pitifully evil nor good. I can't say I hate or dislike them and that's ok. But a good villain needs to be hated a lot, or sympathized a lot. Morally grey characters are good, but not morally boring characters. That and as of now, I thought the plot would be more intriguing. Will write a better review if you can address these concerns. The beginning had a lot of potential, but the drama of this novel is subpar to some of the telenovelas and dramas I have watched. Develop the drama of this novel a bit more. Had a lot of potential which is why I read to chapter 30. But this novel needs work.
The novel is an amazing read! With a possessive ML yearning for only FL that's something you find in most other works but no doubt this novel stands out more! An intricately designed world background with interlinking relationships pertaining to romance, humour, obsession and further more love and adoration. The plot construction is free flowing not forced and clearly accentuates with charm found in good quality work! Good job author!
I am wowed. The book is just so...... [img=update][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update] You guys should definitely read this book. I don't know if it's wrong to do this here, you could check out who?¿ by khenny Esther,. it's not of the same genre but you'll like it.. Kudos to you writer, much love
Interesting story, author 😊 I found your sentences well-written and I like your way of describing. You use metaphors beautifully. There are a few grammatical errors and common nouns in uppercase but they can be easily overlooked by the engrossed reader. I'm sure your story will be perfect with just a few tweaking here and there. Your story has good potential. Keep up the good work and hang in there, author! 😊