It's quite early to put a review but I really like it so the ML is the best he's literary so responsible that I'm touched its so rare to find ML like that so I'm super happy the MC too are very much realistic kind the grammer are also really good story development I could say that it's going really good even though it's pretty early overall I enjoy reading this can't wait for more
I guess its up for a good start. The characters a good and the development is okay. Maybe its just me but its just my opinion but maybe the personality of the mc is a bit... Well.. He contradicts himself a lot... And not like he has a trauma i guess... I understand the ml for acting that way cause he doesnt want to be a certain someone.. The roomate is a good addition and brings more color. I just hope it wouldnt go downhill or become stale. Good luck to our author-nim though and i wish the best~
I might update my review when I'm done fully reading it, but I will say one thing that I'm already having an issue with is the multiple POV for the same situation. Most people can already assume what the other person was thinking, and even if the assumption is wrong, their intentions and thoughts can be explained through their actions. Too much telling not enough showing. However, I will be reading the rest because I like the premise and I'm interested on where the characters will go in the story.
I know I havent read the WHOLE book, but this was sey interesting and I really like how sweet Tristan is, most of the time Alpha’s aren’t like that in other books so I appreciate how patient you made him look, and Justin’s character is just SPOT-ON! thanks so much author and stay safe.[img=recommend]
I just read the early chapters, but I want to give a review. I don't understand why this book still doesn't have enough ratings when this book got a lot of views. Many readers don't bother to leave reviews, I guess 😒 This story is good and detailed. I always love detailed stories, and this book wins my attention. The writings are quite good, the story development is also good. I will look forward to the next releases [img=recommend]