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Aye this novel was a great read :D The beginning was interesting, hehe! Made me wanna read moree <3 I also like the characters' dynamic, especially between the FL and her friends, and also the FL and her family hehe The story flowed nicely, and the writing was great, making for a smooth read! :D I'm excited to read more about the FL and the ML's relationship ehehehhehehe For the mid-chapters, tho, maybe some paragraphs could be broken into several paragraphs so it would be easier to read, but hey that's just a personal suggestion hehe Great work, author! <3
Oh! it is a sweet love story of Shi lian and her Mr CEO where you smile whole time when you read about them_❤❤❤ A very interesting and smoothly written book. The flow of the story is really good. I love the way you showed your FL strong and seasoned. I love the way how all characters are coming in and developing with good speed. The possessive CEO is really good.❤❤❤ Very good book. I suggest everyone to read this love story❤❤❤
😅 Hi, I was planning on making the review after the book is complete but I geuss that isn't necessary now because I'll be giving my review and I might also edit this soon. Anyways, I can only describe my opinion 'I love the book and how it filter the story' I haven't gone that far but I love the book, no fake words, no fake lies and absulotely legit.
Overall, I have enjoyed this story. I'm currently on chapter 179. The pace is great and misunderstandings between the characters are cleared up fast. I like the characters but the fl is sometimes too naive in the face of danger. However, her character is consistent so I accept that that is just how she is. I'm assuming that English is the author's second language. It shows in the writing but the book still flows and is easy to follow. All curse words are used correctly though 😆. I love the story development. You will definitely be engaged and waiting to read what happens next. Overall, Good Job Author.I can't wait to read more.
I admit I stopped at chapter 49. However, no fault to find with the quality of the writing itself. What I liked the most was the pacing, it is very well done. It made me read this far despite strongly disliking Zi Chen. So, congratulations author for writing such a good story I made it til that point. I don’t know if I will continue the story but I still mostly enjoyed what I read. You did a great job, author.