A nice novel easy to read. the grammar is decent and the paragraphs are clear. The author tries to establish a beginning of character building for the protagonist, which is a good thing while waiting to see how it will unfold in the future, I appreciate the chapters with the mystical beast cat reminds me of TOTCF. The first 28 chapters are worth reading while waiting for the other chapters!
Author here! thank you for all the support you have given this work until now! I decided to write this review after the novel hit the 100 chapter mark. So you can expect many character growth both for the mc and the people around him. also the mc is gonna go into the dark path from now, keep that in mind. Bye bye then!
First 100 chapters are really good. Mc really takes advantage of his knowledge of the novel he read from the past life. It went suddenly downhill after 100 chapters author make it change and it seems forced to me. Author slowly nerfing the mc that he makes always now struggle and become a shonen protagonist that always survived in the plot armor.
The nerf came out of nowhere like author need to chill. He is strong yes but throwing the 'potential' he tried to acquire for many chapters and me reading through that. Brother you making me waste my time reading this. Some of your readers don't have the patience to do montage of him just realizing his dreams. I'm telling you this because I'm dropping it.
Main satisfaction of this novel is strength that mc gains through story and that's all . There's nothing wrong with it it's nature of many great Chinese cultivation story's but it s getting quickly repetive power up nerf power up more It's truly sad that author didn't use more of word or side characters ... especially the last , side characters are treated very poorly .We get to know why there are important and how amazing they are talented only for author to treat them like ,, got ur 5 chapter now f off" I hope there will be more development in this direction from now on. More explanation about word and using settings of said word would also be appreciated because as for now it s fells like background for mc to find power ups not a living word . I will leave few thing I felt were missing from this word political scene reaction to mc power emotional connection to any of side characters character development other than ,, I refuse to be loser MORE POWER!'' More of noble environment and how mc deals with it More interactions with original game characters
it was pretty good till 100 chapters and I was enjoying it a lot but that Nerf ame out of nowhere and Destroyed the Novel's potential it looked really forced.had a good time till 100 chaps but dropping it because it would be to boring seeing him climb up the same level again.if the ever delete and rewrite the part update me
It was pretty good at beginning. It’s just that I feel like the story is too focused on plot with very little fighting. He got super high mana affinity and the only fight he used it in was when he was holding back. That’s the other thing, why hold back so much? What’s the point when he wants to break off from family to go solo? Overall, its a decent read just not that blood pumping honestly.