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Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

Author: Long Qingwen
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Jaytroo
JaytrooLv14

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NamelessNathan
NamelessNathanLv4

Honestly, better than what I was expecting. The main character doesn’t start extremely overpowered (though he certainly does acquire power very quickly), and the pacing is good enough. It does suffer a bit from a slight over abundance of face slapping at times, but I still found it tolerable, especially once it got past all of that. It also suffers a bit from strong nationalism at certain parts with the rivalry between countries that are stand-ins for real world countries/regions, but once again, it was still tolerable, at least for me. My overall sentiment was that the story was decent, though by no means exceptional, and it could either become really dull as time goes on, or really become interesting. At the very least, there’s enough here to warrant a read and at least keep an eye on it. The translation does leave a lot to be desired, though. If you’re looking for an extremely unique, well polished story, you won’t find it here. But if you want a decent read you’ll probably at least have a decent time.

Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

Overall a decently good novel with few grammatical errors thous sometimes the sentences confuse me and some of the logic they have doesn’t make sense

Poposecco
PoposeccoLv15

well written story line, with plenty left to the imagination to create an amazing feel. The character development and plot rolls on and keeps you wanting more.

Kevindragon
KevindragonLv14

bro like it's actually a really good novel. It has actual plot and a good MC. The name might make you think it's only about segs, but it's not.

Blim_BlueDust
Blim_BlueDustLv15

I look forward to reading more from this author about the main character and this particular universe. the story so far as well thought out, the character is not a hidden weak to strong archetype. Rather, he uses the abilities he is given to make the most of the situation. When given lemons, I suspect the main character would open a lemonade franchise.

skyprinny
skyprinnyLv2

I recently fell into the rabbit hole of this type of story where mc recruits troops and over the past 8 days have read 1k+ chapters of similar stories Like Lord of the people Recruiting Elf Twins At The Start and lord of the people 100x increase from undead. I think this is probably my favorite of the three I've read even after only 40 chapters only losing stars because of translation only being passable and because I cant justify a 5 star when I've only read a short portion. If anyone has any similiar novels please tell me.

Mohmed_Gaber
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Daoist166612
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merle94
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Anarchy_Sisters
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Shanto_Akter
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ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15

Mutant Succubus is an action/strategy/fantasy/game-like novel. The "succubi" aren't the classic, ecchi type--in fact, there are no signs of ecchi, harem, or romance forty chapters in. A succubus series without ecchi! What is this miracle?! As it turns out, these "mutant succubi" aren't actually the standard succubi. These are more like combat "succubi." Using their magic, high speed, and combat prowess, they fight in strategic battles as a team to mercilessly slaughter their enemies! Rather than remaining practically naked, many end up wearing full-body armor. The translation has a fair bit of gender confusion, math that doesn't make a lick of sense, and some other weird translations. For instance, "deteriorate" is used rather than "disassemble" when skin a monster corpse and preparing its meat. They mean different things. The translation/editing team is also weird about their notes. Instead of leaving them in the circled numbers to click it, they have the notes at the bottom of the page like translations on other sites. The only problem with doing that on Webnovel is that it increases the word count and can increase how much a chapter costs to read. I don't know if they continue this in the unrevealed chapters. There isn't much imagery at all. I have no idea what any of the characters look like. One looks quite young for his age, and the succubi are scantily clad with "hot" bodies, wings, and a tail. None of them have been given a description of their individual appearances, even though some of them have names. The MC is the super serious type without any depth or much personality to him. I don't know what his castle looks like, and I don't know his preferences for anything. Favorite food? Favorite color? Close friends? The only thing I know about his background is that he has a sister who is adopted. Unlike all the other characters in this series, her eye and hair colors have been revealed--she has blond hair and blue eyes. There are a couple of pointless dumb characters who only exist to be face-slapped, but there aren't too many thus far. The world background is limited in description, but it's a rather game-like fantasy setting. Overall, this is a fun light series to read, and it's kept me entertained for the first forty chapters of strategy, leveling, and preparations. If you're looking for character development or a plot that will knock you off your feet, then you should look elsewhere.

Juan_Contreras_9633
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IAMGORGEOUS
IAMGORGEOUSLv4

it's good let's see... the MC is not stupid he's smart he's also not perfect the MC doesn't have A powerful system or powerful cheats instead he has Luck(if I scale his luck it's probably 8/10 not like other protagonist with heaven defying Luck) and he uses his mind well His unit is Succubus or Mutated tier 3 Mutated succubus have 5 times a charm than ordinary succubus but it still have weak offence and defence. DON'T WORRY THE MC IS NOT A PERVERT(His immune to Charms and charm spells)..... BUT HE IS SOMETIMES A LITTLE TEMPTED(Note he is an ordinary Human being)HE IS PATIENT ♥️ I hope this gets an update soon I'm looking forward to it🍷

Bjorn_Stormwave
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Welp, Looks like harem. To bad. Welp, Looks like harem. To bad. Welp, Looks like harem. To bad. Welp, Looks like harem. To bad. Welp, Looks like harem. To bad. Welp, Looks like harem. To bad.

Mohmed_Gaber
Mohmed_GaberLv5

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ronel_franko
ronel_frankoLv4

hello guys, there a few things i want ti say ! first, i will not recommend a novel, because they are not pick up, 2 weeks a go there was 6 novels, and i like 3 of them but only recommended the best in my opinion, i can say for myself that i am kind of a bookworm, i like to read books for 50 years, and i read in the past the best sellers books known today, and hope to read real good stories, back to my problem, from the 6 novel back then i hope that at list 1 of the 3 that i like will be pick up, if not my favorite among them, but for my big surprise the 3 novels that don't have any teste for them was bean pick up, and non of the 3 that i wanted was pick up, so from then i will not goin to read any new trail read, not to be sad later, but only talk about novel by there Synopsis and nothing else so will not be so disappointed later, and only read if they will be pick up so i will not be so sad later, and for this novel the Synopsis is really great lets hope it will be pick up, thank you for reading my sad story here