please continue this book please it is very awesome
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This is very good and I hope that there are more chapters to read
good story but it gets repetitive at one point and MC quite dumb with his actions and feelings towards the girls
Good story but after a while the writing gets basically unreadable. Sometimes using 3 names for one character in the same chapter also having different names for objects every time they are brought up.
Have been following the this book from the start. The book had some issues but the quality of translation has significantly improved over the last few weeks. The storyline is interesting and makes me keep coming back for more. I would recommend this to people who like succubus or kingdom building in general. Different from the other books of similar genre.
Ok there's no succubi chex here people, so disperse. Go look yourself for another fap material. The cover picture was just the usual bait. So carry on...
Trash story, Chinese, No existence mc, Chinese propaganda, I have no respect for people who read this, but at least it's not the worst Chinese written story and not the worst propaganda.
really good so far, is there any novel similar to this where you build your own special army? The MC is cold cuz of the circumstances probably changes later but I hope he stays this way
So far it is a wonderful combat oriented base building novel with plenty of character development and combat scene’s, really hope it gets more traction and author keeps up the quality of the chapters. Also if the above isn’t enough of a hint the novel is very combat oriented so far anyway and the novel is very coherent so far so plus to, anyway the book is good read at least the free section. Also sorry for the run on sentence’s in the review.
the succubi are still missing some Charakter but besides that it goes into a really good direction. Would love if the writer made a side chapter with the POV from atleast one of the succubi
I have read the 40 chapters so far.I actually liked the novel a lot.so I hope it gets picked up.And I want more chapters and I want it to be picked up continue the story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].And so I am giving the novel five-stars.
I will only say this. I hope I gets picked the first week after it gets in the Voting Pool.
its the best only writing this so it gets chosen ok ...........................................................................................................................................................ITS THE BEST
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honestly it's pretty good concept the problem is maybe from translation it's rough but anyway why stop uploading ?????????????????????..................
Trash. The moment you get past trial chapters, the quality drops to garbage. It's clearly edited mtl, and not carefully edited. Do NOT waste money on this. Characterization and world background are quite lacking, while plot is quite ordinary.
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this book is very interesting and has lovely story development
I enjoyed the story and purchased coins to unlock up to chapter 140. I went to use some Fast Passes to unlock more and the costs to unlock have doubled. I have been seeing this on a few different novels over the last couple of weeks and it is turning me off. It was already a stretch for me to justify the costs to unlock more chapters of these novels and now the costs are doubling. It isn't worth it.