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Reviews of Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

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Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

Long Qingwen

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Colr_Gren
Colr_GrenLv2Colr_Gren

Trial Read Review (only from synopsis): (X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out. (YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored. (ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full. (MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out. (P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it. (LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.

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Fealtad
FealtadLv11Fealtad

Why did this get picked???? 😭😭😭 bro there were like 3 ACTUALLY DECENT NOVELS AND OFC THE MUTANT SUCCUBUS ONE GETS PICKED??? Ill take this as a reminder to never have hopes for anything in trial read :((

MajidX200
MajidX200Lv3MajidX200

LtBeefy
LtBeefyLv15LtBeefy

story is not bad. just know the translation quality drops hard in this later on. getting close to MTL quality. examples calls the Male MC her or she multiple times a chapter. call other characters her or he multiple times (incorrect gender) suddenly changes the nickname of characters. suddenly gives characters a nickname as if they always had one incorrect capitilaztion and punctuation.

DaoistJHEy0Z
DaoistJHEy0ZLv13DaoistJHEy0Z

I am looking forward with the story.I found summary interesting.I like taming and kingdombuliding so I looking forward to it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

sdfgbnmhg
sdfgbnmhgLv14sdfgbnmhg

TL quality drops too low to be worth reading. Otherwise this is a pretty average novel. Probably about 4 stars if the story stays as it is and there isn't too much nationalism under the poetry.

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

Sadly this lack lustre story is a rehash of other weak to strong MCs. After a number of chapters I just threw the towel in as you already know the ending which defeats any reading pleasure that could be obtained in this novel. Having Succubus’s as his creature you could imagine various innuendos occurring and it is hinted, but we know it ain’t happening here. Which is pretty much the stereotypical young Chinese male who devotes himself to strength and not relationships, which is a bit more realistic. Anyhow, don’t waste your time with this.

UnholyStarke
UnholyStarkeLv15UnholyStarke

I came into this book with some decent high hopes. And it started off pretty strong but the further I went in the more the quality dropped. I'm not sure who is translating this but there is so many mistranslations that it makes me wonder if they are doing it on purpose. Not only that but the story has so many inconsistencies that it is hard to track what is truly going on.

Heepaa
HeepaaLv4Heepaa

In chapter 195, he gained 500000 energy crystal and 10000 magic crystal and used 80000 EC and 200 MC to upgrade to tier six , there should remain 420000 EC and 9800 MC and the requirements for tier 7 upgrade is 200000 EC and 1000 MC and for some unknown reason the mc says that he didn't have enough resources. What the f**k is that 👎👎👎

Commander_Conquer
Commander_ConquerLv1Commander_Conquer

Look, this novel is trash, worse it even plagiarized plot points from another trash novel*. To make things worse, the translation quality, while fine in the beginning, reaches unedited MTL level of quality later on. *I'm talking about that 99 dragon one. This one has a bit more world building in the beginning, but also has multiple plot points which are exactly the same. (Woman who sells stuff for cheap to gain influence for an alliance; Goblins, which after being discovered attack once at night, only for our MC to go out the next day to wipe them out and sell their armor; a little sister/little brother character who trades with our MC and crafts stuff for them.)

Seraphim28
Seraphim28Lv15Seraphim28

Lemme preface this review by saying: the translation quality for chapters after around 100 is as bad as it gets. The translators stopped caring, obviously, and just slightly edit the MTL. Don't waste currency on this. Outside of the absolutely horrendous quality later, it's pretty cookie cutter for this genre. Not a bad time waster. TLers should be ashamed though, and smacked with dictionaries so they can learn the importance of: 1 not screwing up genders constantly, and 2, learn the importance of not changing a character's name 18 times in one chapter.

SpacialEagle105
SpacialEagle105Lv13SpacialEagle105

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EternalAngel
EternalAngelLv6EternalAngel

raw link pls😄 ...........................................................................................................................

Roktah
RoktahLv14Roktah

it started off so well with plenty of potential. kingdom building with a decently smart mc. but then the typical chinese mc had to make an appearance. our mc was insulted online and of course he could not just ignore it, mind his business and concentrate on developing his strength. no, he had to challenge the one that insulted him, who naturally is supperior to him, to a fight" do you dare fight with your tier 6 troops against my tier 3", lets see who wins blah blah story ruined. i guess i made the classic mistake of falling for a good premise and believing a chinese author can actually write a decent novel.

kassa
kassaLv5kassa

Translation is getting worse with time. They literally used 2 different wrong translations for the same character in a single character in 2 consecutive paragraphs.

Rappel
RappelLv15Rappel

Just another copy/paste novel about Lords with monster. If you have read one you can immediately see the similarities. No personality. Special Monster. Trade channel. One saint chick, etc.

Electron
ElectronLv13Electron

So far so good. Read up until 25, and it's an actual good story. I would not call it trash or whatever else like some clowns. At the same time, I really dislike the idea of skimpy dressed succubi. But, recent chapter changed that a bit.

Theoritizer
TheoritizerLv12Theoritizer

How much you're gonna bet that this succubus is mentioned only at the beginning and barely anywhere else 😂 .

SperenSilverblade
SperenSilverbladeLv15SperenSilverblade

Usually I don't like kingdom building stories not that much, because they lack sometimes the action. But this story is a little bit different, the balance between action and kingdom building is the correct amount for me [img=recommend] The main problem with this story is the poor writing quality. I read over 300 chapters and there is still a big problem with the gender of the various characters. The main character switched between "he" and "she" very often in the same chapter. Further the naming of the characters is not consistent, e. g. "Elise" is also named "Illis" or "Ylise". @Author-San: Please review the chapters and fix the errors, it makes reading more pleasurable.

BigBoyJenkins
BigBoyJenkinsLv15BigBoyJenkins

First lets say the whole rebirth thing is very stupid and definitely only plays a part in like 2 chapters( as of this review ive read about 180 chapters of about 300ish)Translations, are absolutely garbage, names for things change so much that i have forget what currency or stones or whatever that they need. Also the story will have a requirement of needing 10,000 energy crystals, and 10 magic crystals for an upgrade, but then three chapters later, need 20,000 energy crystals and 5 magic crystals for the same upgrade( mc already had some, but mysteriously didn’t mention it as if he didn’t have any) so he had to search again or fight for more. Also author will complete forget certain beasts or character in character territory just to weaken the mc.Feels very rushed in a lot if spots because of this.