Ambitious_Duck
This is the first time that I have read a decent eastern fantasy in a really long time. Especially one that is not translated. The synopsis is pretty gripping and the story is really interesting. I really like the MC and the FL. I also like the way the author foreshadows stuff and the slightly dark undertones.
This story has a good premise. Writing quality. The flow is fluid and each of the narratives is easy to understand. Stability of Updates. I think so far it has stable updates from time to time. Story Development. The development feels just right, not too fast or slow. Character Design. The characters are portrayed well. They have their own distinct qualities that made them stand out from the others. World Background. Well-written. Overall this story has lots of potentials. Keep it up, author!