Story has great potential! However, it was very cringy due to infinite number of mistakes, I'd recommend the author to fix it. Re-reading the chapters before posting would be the most helpful to yourself. However, another way to lessen these blunders, is by using an outside app or grammatical extensions! Good luck.
Kudos to the author. Your book is an interesting read. The protagonist seems to have a lot on her plate. I love the title, by the way, it has a kind of light and warmth to it. You're an awesome writer with potentials although, I feel you can still work more on your pacing and punctuations🌹. Keep up the good work author, and the sky will be your beginning🌹❤
It has been a very interesting story from the synopsis till the latest chapter.... the story has a very good plot and the author has done a very good job in making us readers understand every scene and plot so far.... looking forward for more updates...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]