Reviews of Loner in Danmachi
Loner in Danmachi
Darkness_Enjoyer
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All I'd like to know is why the Title have "Loner" in it when there's a "Harem" tag, A "Loner" is alone, "Harem" is with "Multiple" people. All I'm saying is that the Title makes no sense, other than that the story is oryt.
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As long this is not faithful to the canon plot then it will be good. I hope for a twist that takes the story on another path. Istg too many danmachi fanfics are just self inserts doing the exact same thing Bell did so its basically the same story but with a different character and dialouge. I know this will be different tho Im sure lol
Bro read if you want I’m saying that it isn’t for me. This story is very bad in my opinion. The writing quality is definitely amateur and the content is meh. The mc is meant to be anti social but isn’t. There is a gross amount descriptive writing for everything that makes it seem very repetitive like a circle. The dialogue is so dull, just unintelligent, and unnecessary. It’s readable but it’s a brainless read. Shut down your brain before reading if you want the best experience.
The idea of the protagonist selling his soul through the system is irritating if the missions force him to do something against his will, but fortunately this has not happened so far. I like to think that the God who offered the system is a way for the author to guide the story and protagonist as he wants and have a justification for this in the form of missions. Possessive Hestia is annoying because it's harem, but Bell being a woman seems quite attractive, a cute ans innocent bunny. Google Translate.
la historia esta llendo bastante bien , el protagonista es agradable , la construcción del mundo es muy poco pero es entendible ya que hace poco empieza , recomiendo que no sea solo en orarion la Historia y tambien que si haces cambio en la historia avisa antes de hacerlos o que lo digas , asi no habrá gente que se enoje , es titulo tiene sentido y anque el mc es un solitario no significa que no sea sociable , tímido o manso es solo su personalidad pero igual quiere a las personas que se le acercan y parecen interesados en tener una amistad con el , el título del solitario se refiere a que es un solitario en la mazmorra ........ la historia va bien solo le faltan un par de cosas pero como recién comienza no voy a hablar , ¿ es recomendable para leer ? ...... sisi es entretenido , fácil de leer , buena escritura , buen comienzo , mc agradable , interesante , y mas .... por ahora un 8,50 o 9 pero como recién empieza hay que esperar aun
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