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Leveling System in Apocalypse World

This will be a story about a survivor who tried to survive until the End but still died. "I regret my entire Life" The young man said as he was surrounded by a lot of zombies. He knew that he didn't have a chance now that he was bitten at least he wouldn't die getting eaten to chunks by Zombies. He trusted many people but in the end all of them Betrayed him, They used him and when he had no used anymore they would just throw him to the landfill. He regrets for not living his life, Having a Love and He regrets that in the end he didn't survive. [Leveling System Activated] [Host last wished has been granted...] [Activating Reality Breaker] [Gaia has not agreed on the transport] [Host wish is a top priority] [Disposing Opposition....] [Opposition Destroyed] [Reality Breaker Activated] The young man felt an earth and saw the buildings around him collapsed. He looks at the sky and saw a crack that was trying to suck him in. He tried to hold onto something but he was already flying through the sky before he could do it. [Preparing for year 2012] [Travelling in 3....2.....1....0] The Crack sucked him from the world and the young man was dragged into the abyss. (MC is Evil)

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Don't put power stones in this story.

I am the Author of this Story, I have a piece of bad news and somehow good news.

I am dropping the Book, Before the readers try to burn me in my own stake.

There are several reasons I dropped the book, I read my book from the start. Taken much research via (Youtube and Google) about storytelling. I like my story but something is trying to stop me from continuing.

1. Authors block: I don't know how to continue this story anymore and for some unknown reason. I lost motivation, The Characters of this story is somehow bland.

2. Characters: Leo is the definition of Gary Stue, There isn't any leveling even though the title is a Leveling System. He became powerful without leveling, He became a god without leveling, What the fuck would happen if he levels up?

3. Plot: I have tested my Apocalypse writing, You have managed to see a chapter where I tested the zombies or the apocalypse would which made a massive failure. The Apocalypse plot is stopping me from continuing my story.

4. PowerFantasy: I will be honest, I am a rookie writer and author. The first time I made my story, I made the characters powerful but they are pretty bland. This is probably due to the fact that my mind is still stooping low in the power fantasy. The Universe of this story would give Leo everything he wanted.

5. Female Lead: Alex is the Female lead of my story, But she doesn't have a good factor other than being a Yandere. I also like her but she is easily forgettable and she probably forgot her past trauma which made no sense.

6. Gary Stue: Like I said before, The Universe would bow on Leo's will. This makes him a Gary Stue, Everything would go on his way without any explanation and everything would be in his plan. There was no definite explanation on why he was so powerful, and why everything goes his way.

7. The MC is smart but the World is Dumb: I have seen this type of story where the Mc is smart but the disappointing part is that the World is Dumb. After finishing reading this novel, The world is probably just there to make Leo cool than anyone which is bullshit.

That is the many reasons why I drop this Novel...

You might think that it only ends here but there is probably more.

[Let's talk about the Good News.]

1. I am reconstructing the whole story, I don't know if this would be deleted or not. but the story would be reconstructed into a new story.

2. As much as I spew many hateful things towards the story, I love the characters so I would probably bring them with me.

3. Reconstructing means creating a new story, I am in the process of making the New Story under the same plot but not focus on the apocalypse.

4. Although I said that the Apocalypse is one of my not good genres, There is still an apocalypse in this story but it will not be the main plot.

5. This would be a dark fantasy story so readers who can't take the MC suffering left and right while also killing people left and right. This story is not for you.

6. Leveling system would still exist but I will cut off the power boost and would make the MC level up with his own power without having the overpowered nonsense rewards.

7. The Characters I am taking would have different roles but the same personality, You must not see them in the Apocalypse world. The New Story is a new universe, So they might be a little bit different from the story here.

8. I am currently making the story, I probably just finished 3 chapters. 1 chapter has already been uploaded but I am making a mass release of 20 to 30 chapters.

9. This Story is an ALTER, The MC is weak as fuck but he will get stronger and probably be an Evil MC.

10. I made Alex a real psychopath... Don't hit me with the bullshit, She would probably be tamed by the MC so I guess. Alex is braver and Evil than the MC, Since she is a borderline psychopath. But I guess she will have a soft spot for him via author powers. (Don't worry, I'll make it sensible.)

11. The Word will be different, Real-world applications are limiting me so I would make my own small world.

12. The Name of the Novel would be different but similar at the same time, It won't be seen in my profile since it still one chapter. (But can you guess it tho?)

For the readers who are reading this, sorry for wasting your time. I am an asshole but I just cannot force myself to continue a story that is blocked. The MC is too powerful that I have no idea how I would continue the story.

I am Sorry...

Anyway, This story is drop. I am reconstructing the whole story into a new one. An Alternate One.

Sorry for wasting your time.

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