The concept seems good so I will leave this review. You confirming that there will be a harem has made me really happy. Many novels like this tries to not have a harem yet writes the female characters in a way that you will want more than one girl to get togheter with the Mc and it always makes me really mad. Also you saying that the romance will start hundreds of chapters into the novel makes me hopeful that it will be at least over 500 chapters. I personally hope for over 1000 chapters but I can't really demand it from the author when I myself can't even write a story with a hundred chapters.
Author here to give himself a shameless review. What can you except from this novel? A good background 7 to 14 chapters a week. Excellent Writing Quality. Even if there are mistakes, they won't be eye catching. Slow paced story development at some part & fast paced at others depends mostly on the rhythm of the story. Characters with actual personality
Author I’ll be genuine with you it’s your story and it’s up to you how to write it but sometimes listen to your readers a bit after all you are writing for people to read. Ok now for my critique on this why are we almost at chapter 500 before he even awakens? First of all your update speed is maddening and slow and it seems like we need to wait for ages for it and then the story seems fast yet slow at the same time fast in the sense a lot has happened a lot of info fights lore and background but slow in the sense that it’s update is bad and the this guy is just reaching the capital at chapter 500 its really frustrating after all someone like me spent several months waiting for chapters if i did that with other novels I’ll have a lot but with yours I barely got up to 100 chaps honestly wish you would work on your update speed and not drag out some stuff too much I thought after waiting for months and saving up to 100 chapters he’ll awaken but he just about to start trial 1 smh. And not like I don’ appreciate the op abilities he has gotten along the way and the fights but I still feel like you could’ve cut up anywhere from 80-100 chaps of excess info and story dragging and the story would be good still or even better
it's a solid novel, but I got a few problems with it: 1) the amount of filler chapters that explain the world and characters (I know they are important information, but it could be implemented in a better way) 2) I felt that some events in the early chapter are kinda forced like how did he adapt so well in the beginning and what did he decided to do after discovering he is in a novel. furthermore, this problem becomes more apparent with the maid.
The story is good so far. Although the evil stepmother seems to be an unreasonable psycho, the progression is good. But the level up healing stuff the MC was talking about seems too unrealistic even with a system, it feels like it undermines the rest of the story and could just be poor armor, to me at least. Otherwise I like the story so far.