The_Young_Flash
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Don't like the way you have designed the MC. There is too much drama in the story. Everyone wants to see his quirk powers in marvel instead of all the depressing struggle that MC faces to find himself back in his home. Don't do so much drama and try to get his powers back and get back some action into the story. This is an MHA X Marvel crossover everyone expects some action, not the drama.
Great fanfic. Astounding writing, good upload rate, long chapters, and a good story. Although in chapter twelve he ruined the story by having his love intrist cheat on him. Fanfics aren't supposed to have drama like that. Kinda defeats the purpose in my opinion. Nobody wants to see the mc get cucked. Other than me just being stingy about that it is a great story that definitely deserves a chance.
MCU is scuffed af, everyone there is like 20x as strong, Loki is somehow equal to cap in strength and cap can now lift 24000 pounds or more. But great great story, the background, the drama, this has the potential to become a great story simply because it dines't go lemilion has quirk and goes and beats everyone up. A true hero faces adversity and this shows it perfectly. Thank you for this story.
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