I personally don't like chinese fanfics about naruto, what i hate most about them are the name mistakes, once i tried to read it and i didn't understand anything, because the names were in chinese and i didn't recognize the portrayed characters The author here corrected the names, so 5 stars, a lot of people think it's bad, but for those who don't have what to read, it's fun
this is probably one of my favorites and people will say it's bad because of the translator but I like it I wouldn't say it became worse because 10% of the story was a spelling mistake🤣😁👍 but I like it so please make some more chapters and remember we're here to support YOU author remember that and also here's some cookies.
I have a request. This overall fanfiction isn't bad, if its tweaked a bit with more clearer english, it will be a fun to read fanfic. Am I allowed to edit these chapters into a more clearer and gramatical english. Another bit, could I then post the edited fanfic. You will be credited but yh. If you don't like it, I don't mind, its just that this fanfic could get more love if it wasn't just machine translated
My brain actually hurts... get either a translator or a editor, or download Grammarly for free, or even just Ctrl C + Ctrl V it into Google docs, it will do wonders, I speak fluent English and still use Grammarly. honestly at this point the only thing that is fluid in the story is the genders of the characters he she idk anymore I am actually going to perish.
I think the story is pretty good but unfortunately it's a mess, why? That's because part of the story focuses on the butterfly effect, so when I read it I felt that the MC was just a side character With a strong power or a strong system so my impression for the MC is that it's average and nothing interesting, and also I'm still confused about the purpose of MC? Why is he hiding I mean hiding his power is it because of black zetsu? If it's true, why not just delete it, right? Easy? Well, that's just my personal opinion, if there are harsh words, I'm sorry, just keep up the story