1• Characters name keeps changing. 2• I won’t lie, this translation of the book has me cracking up witu laughter so much and I’m at work, and I barley am on chapter 5. I’ve skimmed the other chapters and it’s the same. 3• Feels a LOT like a Chinese novel, but that’s just me. (Only needs a jade beauty to get there and some “young masters” Pft) 4• Not a bad story idea in all honesty, could be a little more fleshed out and expanded upon. Feels like it’s a little lacking in character development.