Reviews of Kingmaker's Revenge


Kingmaker's Revenge


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SHAMELESSLY, it is the author giving my own first novel a review. i hope you all are enjoying it. this is a story that i've had in mind for a while because i'm a sucker for evil women in general. i also just love writing and it's always been a passion of mine. again, i'm thankful for everyone that has been reading or is reading. i hope to continue to write in the future and maybe make more novels and books !! thanks once more xoxo

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Literally binged all the chapters today with no regrets! This story is so good. It’s well written with good pacing, great characters, snappy dialogue and plenty of mystery, intrigue, revenge and romance. Definitely recommend giving this a read!


I like the writing style especially the metaphors you used in the description. The dialogue is sarcastic and witty and brilliant especially the punchlines between the protagonist and the antagonist. This book looks promising. Please give it a try.


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1) I second all reviews written thus far; 2) Beware: this story/book/whatever it is is addictive. Like, very; 3) Okay I have tons of stuff to say (write?) about this but I'm also too lazy to type and explain it all so all you need to remember is that the mc is FREAKING AMAZING. Basically she makes sense, she's logical, she's vicious (/evil/cunning) but still somehow has really sweet moments and stays human (? -- you get what I mean) meaning she's not some kind of robot who's already calculated everyone's moves a year in advance but makes mistakes which are frustrating (not against her though) 5) Obv she's strong. 6) If you've just read this extremely torturous review, then quit selfharm and get a life. Except if you're the author. In this case, please do me a favour forget you just read no 6. Thanks!


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I am mainly reading this to see her father suffer 😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬


I’m disappointed, I thought that i’d finally get a good evil female mc story but no… It’s the same old cliches, I continued reading despite the tropes because I liked your writing but this is too much. She somehow managed to make her brother the king but she blushes every conversations she has with a kid, a KID. Typical reaction for the ML I guess, I thought that I would see a strong and independent MC but no, also why is her character so inconsistent, sometimes she haters her father and sometimes she wants his love. After everything that he’s done…. I know I already said it but why is she doing the thing every female MC does when they speak to the ML. "I can’t read hin" "he outsmarted me" "he’s so sharp I have to be more careful!" and their relationship feels so forced, the moment they interacted the first time I knew this would happen but still…. I continued reading hoping for the best. But still I guess that’s what poeple like here, goody two shows MCs that is depende on the ML. Also why is she even reincarnated if she still acts like a kid? I cringe every time she calls herself evil… Please tell me it gets better, and I’ll immediately read everything and endure the start again…. My review is what I felt and not what you usually read, I try to describe my experience as vividly as possible so that Authors can improve. Hopefully this review helps you, that’d make me happy. Anyways sorry if this came out as rude but just like I said i’m explaining everything I felt without sugarcoating.


I couldn’t stop reading this story. I love the characters and their development so far. The story keeps you at the edge and smiling at the same time. Highly recommended. Waiting patiently for more. [img=recommend]


Amazing book, Post a lot more then I do on my other account πŸ˜‚ so clearly not as lazy as me and is really good at what she writes and amazing plot makes people want to continue reading


Detailed and well-thought characters, good speed in developing the story and satisfying homebuilding. The story does not get lost in nonsense. I do not usually read this kind of story, but this one does worth my time.


this book is fantastic ✨✨✨ I love everything about it including the narration, fl's personality, her schemes, and everything. I saw a few comments threatening to drop this amazing book cuz apparently, the FL is too evil.πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ like it's how the story's supposed to be. a cruel kingmaker who has blood on her hands. if the fl will become a saint then it will lose its originality. I hope that the author won't change her personality. it's very boring always reading the same good and kind personality of other fl's . this book is perfect just the way it is. ❀️❀️❀️


This book is incredible! I love how the FL is so determined to change her fate, but in the process, she's learning more about herself. She has so many layers, yet remains relatable. This story won't leave you disappointed!


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Brilliant. From the premise to the development of the plot, characters, and overall setting, this story is truly captivating. The cast of characters is well thought-out, each having depth, personality, and their own unique traits. The only thing I would criticize is how the passage of time is unclear, but since the story revolves around events rather than time, I feel like the style that it is written is well-suited for the plot. Thank you for this wonderful read, and I look forward to future developments!


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What a treat. A reincarnation /revenge with a little twist, Characters we sympathise with easily and a story that will make you binge read. You are warned...


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i like it! the writing can get a little long winded at times but the characterization is good. i'm looking forward to read your other works author! i think that you did a good job, esp since this is your first story. i like lumielle and am curious to continuously know more about her.