VicL
The story is extremely well written and is very fluid. It feels proper and flows well. The world is well thought out, and the characters feel like real people. The story itself is a concept I find to be completely unique, and it is a real gem. But. While the writing is good and the story is good, the way it starts is really bad. It just throws you in and inserts you in to the mc's life, or technically his death, you don't even know who he is, what he did in the past or why is he the mc, and not some other John Doe. Maybe if there was more prologue to the start of the story it would be a complete 5 star story. Now. That said. I'm not sure if I like the story or not. Like I said before it is well written, but I didn't 'know' the mc until somewhere around chapter 40. But all things considered I will continue to read, and despite that one major flaw I have no complaints, so I suggest that others read it as well.
>Current reading status: chapter 34 ................................................................ >Quality assessment: great ................................................................................. >Recommended action: continue reading ...................................................... _
This is unequivocally my favourite novel going on this platform. The story flows very well with an incredible mix of themes with its fantastical yet real world building. Real in the sense that while the story contains fantasy elements the problems the characters encounter don't necessarily have straight forward modern solutions. Problems are more oft than not taken step by step. In other words the MC is not OP (I thought I should put that out there quite early) and as the plot progresses he brings more and more people/human potential to achieve his goals (the MC does not have the typical wuxia like goals so RAFO) All of the important characters are fully fleshed out often getting their own POV segments/chapters and their development as the story progresses is a joy to read. Often the funniest moments come with the way the characters will remark on some of the bat **** crazy stuff that may befall themselves and the other communities within the world.
What an amazing little gem indeed. I stumbled onto it randomly and have fallen in love with this book. I'm a little early in the story still so can't really comment about how often it gets updated and all that but it's an amusing read. For those that are looking for action heavy stuff, you won't find it here. This is more on the comedy side of things. I won't spoil by going into details here but if you're looking for something light-hearted and amusing to read, check this novel out. I think it's going to be one of the 3 novels I'll be spending spirit stones on...