Reviews of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Most people just Nerf Saiyans in DC or Marvel worlds. But considering how good his previous DB fanfic was, i trust him to know about saiyan abilities in depth.

many things make me stop liking this fic. the first I the poorly choice of making mc a captive so you can limit his strength so when he reach earth he is not extremely op. second is how you choose to make him have 3 identy (civilian,hero and villain) extremely put of by a Sayan that care about the law of the world ( without counting how troublesome and painful for his friend that trusted him when it will be it's discovered, yes it will be discovered one day). third is what made me hate this completely you gave the mc the goal to go to the DB universe again. why would I waste my time in reading a novel that in the future mc will go to a world I'm extremely bored to read so much fanfic about(the one you write for example is from there so making mc go to that place when you have already a fic about it is weird).

The mc is not a sayian and is a disgrace to the Sayian race smh 🤦🏾‍♂️

the story was going relatively well, there were certain things that bothered me like the fact that he was nerfed and the triple secret identity but I decided to ignore it and give him another chance but the fact that he is a puppy of Kara bothers me since he does almost everything he asks and reaches the limit when he reveals his past life that he is a reincarnated and that they are a caricature

If You don’t want an Mc telling other that he was a reincarnator and that everyone here is just a character in his world. even charles xavier became Crazy the moment he knows that he was just a Char. In a comics and even deadpool killed them because of it.

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For people who don’t like stories that are ruined by harem don’t read this …….. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .…………………………………………………………………………. .

bro mad respect for the author but I had too drop after the mc revealing that you're a comic character stunt. Like dude could have said I knew of raven and supergirl because of a future vision or something but not like that bro. Because let's be real you know what happens when that's revealed. I feel like your approach was poorly executed but maybe it was just me but mad respect to you it's just that your approach wasn't for me

hi looks like your making a new ff novel I read your broly and I hope this one is also the same as the other one. looking forward to see how a saiyan fits in the DC universe

It’s decent and recommend if you have nothing to read. Have to let you know though. Since I was close to dropping it. The MC tells his love interest that she is a character. Mentioning that he transmigrated. It was in chapter 33 or 34. So pretty far in I would say. Which really dropped my enthusiasm to read the novel. Will not put spoiler because I felt like that should have been done earlier. Not leading on the readers and coming out with that.

the Fanfic is descent, but the 1-Star is for forcing Plot and destroying any Sense of fanfic just for Harem

I was very annoyed by the stupidity of the main character. I didn't care what he said about reincarnation and cartoons. I didn't care when he became a super saiyan while talking to a girl. I didn't care when the hero didn't kill enemies. Even when the main character agreed to another relationship because his girlfriend fell in love with another partner, okay. But... Seriously? The protagonist wants to give up all super power, potential immortality, beautiful women and power in order to return to his original reality? To become nobody again? Disgusting.

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because you lied and added harem because you lied and added harem

The mc is not a sayian and is a disgrace to the Sayian race

it just shi*.

I tried to get in to this but I can't it's filed with so much exposition that it's a bore to read through he monologs so much like at one point he spends three THREE sentences talking about climbing a tree it's ridiculous so much can be cut out but it's not and the only reason I can think of that it's not is cuz he is padding the story with usless detail to make it to 5k words per chapter here is some wisdom for you show don't tell you keep telling us all this stuff that isn't important at the moment so there is no story to pull a reader in

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This just for your old work Hopefully this is just as good if not better….… ???????????????????? This just for your old work Hopefully this is just as good if not better….…

The Fanfic is descent, but the 1-Star is for forcing Plot and destroying any Sense just for your Story. Poor excuse of an Author at Chapter 11