The story is quite intriguing, and the magic MC is using is versatile enough and has room for a lot of growth. The chapters are good, but the update schedule is way too slow for comfort ... Well, it can be a great fic if the author does not drop it. Simply because this fic has that potential and the starting plot is also quite solid. All the best~ regads, from a fellow writer...
I couldn't get past the first chapter. It sucks because I love Fairy Tail and genuinely wanted to read this. I'd say this story is overall average, with the stereotypical beginning of bad memory loss cliche. The author gives us too much information that does not contribute much to the story and even extends it. The writing itself feels like an MTL with interesting word choices. The author doesn't know how to write dialogue. The story doesn't have the harem tag, but the text feels like it's hinting towards it for some reason. Overall, this is an average novel. 2/5.
Writing quality could use some improvement and editing, switching pov so suddenly makes it so annoying, and the story flow is kinda boring with the constant mention of useless things makes me want to drop it the moment I read the first chapter, it's a long chapter yet it nothing happens, to be honest, world background is ok. It's an ok read overall Maybe use Grammarly or watch a YT video about how to make the flow of the story better and the pov change better.
(Ch62) Nothing glaring wrong with it it’s just boring. It goes way to into detail for things that don’t need it and you end up just skipping forward 2 chapters because you couldn’t care less about the lore of the underwater city that never gets talked about again. Also the romance is forced and the grammer is bad. No harem yet so that’s a plus. But I wouldn’t be surprised if it’s added in the future with how the story’s going.
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Writing a meh review. starts with a cliche waking up some unknown location first tew things to check if he can still bang chics.. To be fair the OP told us the the MC will be very overpowered. just read a couple chapters and the MC just kept pulling out one skill after another. why not just write Light Écriture God on himself and just be done with it.
I'm going to be as objective as I can. It's a good story. Not great, but good enough to be read as a passtime. Writing quality is par with grammar errors here and there. The pace is great. It doesn't feel rushed or too slow. There is a nitpick I have with the author's writing style. There is just too much detail and repetitions when describing stuff. The author literally used one whole chapter to describe about an item. Other than that, it's a good story.