Journey Of A Legend

Wit a Good flow and good characters I think this has a really good potential. How sometimes it has some stupid parts, but it will get better if you continue to read. The soul stone concept is a really interesting idea, so continue writing!

Itt has a really good flow, but sometimes I feel some mistakes, but with time I think those will be okay. Keep up the good work! ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

I think this is the best novel of all time.I never had that experience before in this genre because that novel is matching with my preferance.I hope everybody gonna read this novel.Who read this i hope his/her family will be the luckies family in this World.Thank you have a nice day love you all❤❤

Interesting idea for a novel. Good start, keeping on writing and improving your craft. My suggestion is that the MC feels a little flat at a glance, perhaps give him a bit more personality or motivation. Otherwise, keep at it my friend.

So far so good! Carry on writing please! Can't wait to read more of it. Damn you word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!