55 Hello and Question

Hello to everyone reading the Jojo System on Remnant!

I apologize for the long wait and for leaving this fanfic for.... what the hell a year!

And the last time I uploaded was fucking 4 months ago! Ahm!

Anyway back to the reason why I'm writting again I began to catch up on some of the work I made along with old Fanfics and came to a realization of sorts...

I felt lacking motivation for this fanfic.

Not like it's bad or anything but more so that I felt I made some fuck ups on some scenes and with the Jojo System of sorts being exploited as it did.

After some thoughts on what to do with this fic of either dropping or on hiatus, I was thinking of rewriting it since how I made it read was good and filled with Jojo quotes along with the actions but also made the system exploited following Eis Schnee dreams to become OP.

But I also felt it was left good how it is because most people like it as well as the interactions with some of the characters and family development in some scenes. And after reading some other fanfics of Jojo I got inspired to do some of those ideas but the question was how with the MC how is it?

I re-read it again and thought I could've done better in some scenes and not used the Jojo system in some ways. For now, though it's because I'm split on rewriting it or think how to improve it how it is?

Or how would I improve the Jojo system?

I have improved with my writing to get a better result of the story now so the question is should I make a rewrite the story or make an edited version of the story by changing the system functions?

By that, I mean the MC can only get stands by finishing missions that are given to the system along with the items of Jojo as well as fighting styles?

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