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Jodoh selamanya

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* * * The Synopsis will be in the Glossary* * * (Haven't decided if I'm actually going to add R-18 and excessive gore scenes or not! And yes, the image is AI-generated. I'm terribly untalented at drawing and I'm too broke to commission art, but I promise I will in the future when I can afford it.) * * * This is my first novel and I don’t expect it to be good since I’m just starting out. So please read my story and critique it. I want to know what I did or am doing wrong and how to improve or what to learn from it. I am well aware that my story would never get close to a 9 since I’m new at this, but I’m at the very least aiming for a 7 or a 7.5 rating. I am more than willing to accept criticism, and I understand if I wrote something stupid, but please don’t give me an overly negative attitude about it. * * * – 「Authors Notes」 - I will do what I can to keep chapters around or over 1500 words per chapter. - Since I am new and have a job, I will do my best to hopefully complete at least one chapter within two or three weeks until I improve and can hopefully reduce that time. - I have many ideas and concepts that I really like and I also drew inspiration from several games and other media. I will do my best to use, build on, add to, and or reference these things so please tell me if I’m just blatantly plagiarizing them. I want to write my own story without simply reinventing the wheel, rewriting a copy and paste, or stealing someone else's idea. - As a new writer, I will definitely make a lot of mistakes, so I would definitely appreciate it if you could help point out if and when I make grammatical errors, contradictions, and retcon things. I will try to go back and fix my mistakes on my own, but I would appreciate it if you could spot me on them as well. - I plan on having a semi big cast of characters. I understand that multiple POVs can be annoying and ruin the story or pacing or both so I promise to do my best to focus solely on my big 3. - Though I want to, I don’t know how to properly write adult scenes that will fit well with certain moods I’m putting the characters in. I don’t want to add a needless or mindless adult scene just because two people finally decided they like each other or something. I’ll see if I can capture the mood properly. Please judge me if I don’t, though. - Since one of my characters is supposed to know everything that's happening within the story I'll do my best to make him speak as naturally about these things as possible. - One thing I really liked about a popular anime I liked was how they included bits of information, such as abilities, unique equipment, enemies, locations, and other details about the world before and after the short commercial break so I plan on trying to have some short notes/information about the world at the bottom of every chapter. * * * Thank you for choosing to read my novel, I hope it's something you look forward to reading * * *

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Unforeseen love (tagalog)

Umuwi si Eppo sa kanilang probinsiya mula sa city. Katatapos lang ng semetre kaya umuwi kahit hindi naman iyon ang gawain niya dati. Idinahilan lamang niya sa magulang na umuwi na lang siya dahil matagal na noong huling pag-uwi niya sa lugar Nasa tambayan siya sa kanilang barangay ng mga oras na iyon para mapag-isa at makapag-isip. Sa kanilang bahay kasi ay hindi siya makapag-isip ng tama dahil sa mga kapatid niyang maiingay. Kailangan niyang mag-isip ng solusiyon sa problema niya, si Arnel kasing kasintahan niya o dating kasintahan ay walang maitutulong sa kanya. Masamang masama ang loob niya sa kanyang kasintahan dahil imbes na sumaya ito sa ibinalita niya ay kabaligtaran naman ang ginawa. Nagkalambong ang kanyang mga mata ng maalala ang dating kasintahan kung may magagawa sana siya para hindi na muna ito sumagi sa isip niya ay ginawa na niya. Ngunit ang dahilan kung bakit nalulungkot siya ngayon ay dahil rin ito sa nobyo. Masama sa kanya ang ma-stress kaya dapat yung magagandang alaala dapat ang iniisip niya pero kapag ginawa naman niya ay ang hindi kanais-nais na pangyayari sa huli nilang pagkikita sa kasintahan ang maalala. Malalim ang iniisip niya kaya hindi niya napansin na may kasama na siya sa tambayan at hindi na nag-iisa. Kanina pa pinagmamasdan ni Rod si Eppo na kay lalim ng iniisip. Dumaan nga siya sa harap nito kanina pero hindi man lang siya napansin. Tumikhim na siya ng makitang parang iiyak na si Eppo. Bumaling naman agad sa kanya ito. "Ang lalim ng iniisip mo ah, may problema ka ba?" Tanong niya. "Wala. Wala akong problema." Ngumiti ito ng pilit. "Kumusta na pala iyong mga binigay ko sayong textmate may nauto ka na ba?" Nakatawang tanong nito. "Well, medyo OK naman sila. Pero parang hindi naman interesado ang mga iyon sa seryosong relasyon" "Pakipot lang ang mga iyon, pagbutihin mo lang kasi." Sabi nito. "Ganun.. Kailan ang dating mo? Kalagitnaan yata ng semestre ngayon ah." Pag-iiba niya sa usapan dahil ayaw niyang pag-usapan nila ang tungkol sa mga textmate. Yumuko ito bago mahinang sumagot. "Hindi. Katatapos lang semestre" Tumango na lang siya dahil alam niyang hindi nito gawaing umuwi na lang basta kahit pa ganoon kahaba na walang pasok. Hindi na lang siya nagsalita. Lumipas ang mahabang Sandaling katahimikan. Naputol lang iyon ng biglang tumayo si Eppo. "Uuwi na ako." Sabi nito at umalis na. Nakatingin lang siya sa likod ni Eppo habang paalis ito. Maganda ang dalaga, masipag at mabait pa, marami itong manliligaw sa kanilang lugar pero hindi sineseryoso ni Eppo. Naisip nga niyang baka may nobyo na ito sa city kaya ganun na lang ito sa mga manliligaw. 'Napakaswerte ng nobyo mo Eppo kung mayroon man' sabi ng isip niya. Napabuntong hininga na lang siya. N: Kung napukaw nito ang interes mo, salamat!

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