Author I love this story and for the me the story is not slow-paced at all. So stay awesome and stay safe author. Lastly please don’t drop this story. I don’t know why but there a curse for show biz series in this site. Almost 80 percent of show biz story can’t make it to chapter 50 and are dropped. So author you got a good story right here and please don’t drop.
Want to just give a standing ovation to the author this story is a hidden gem for its genre. I usually don’t give many reviews but I really enjoy this type of genre and the story just flows so well. I love that the system doesn’t seem so intrusive and just serves to complement the MC. (Ps wanted to get this review in before author goes on temporary Hiatus to show some love) Thank you so much for a great novel 😀
I tapped on the story by accident, but when I started reading it, I actually found it attractive. the tag says slow paced, but I don't think so at all. there are mini time skips and the progression of the story is stable. you feel like it's going somewhere. world building is not that important because it's basically based on our own world. only difference is that the mc is from a fictional country in the Pacific ocean. if I'm not wrong, it's just below Hawaii or something. others might find it dull, but to me it's relaxing. no action, no romance, but it's heartwarming and you journey with the mc. I'm eating it 4.5 for now. I hope the author don't make it trash.
First of all it started very good but as the story went on it started to get quite unrealistic and annoying, The MC is much more talented the other people yet he add a group of young people to his band? and all of them agree? they all move together? The MC adding them together was a mistake. In my opinion the story could've been the story would've been much more enjoyable if that didn't happen.
This review is written after having read most of the locked chapters that are out so far. The one thing that always stuck with me is that the author swore he wouldn’t let the quality drop after he monetized the chapters, but the funny thing is that he did. While the writing quality stayed the same, the amount of fillers increased SIGNIFICANTLY. The author even acknowledged that the latest chapter is bad, so I’m not wasting fast passes on it. I still really like this book, but its frustrating to wait for a new chapter only for it to be filler that you wouldn’t want to read anyways, I appreciate the author’s work and enjoy their book, but I wish there was more consistency in the content and its relevance.
Author, I wish I've found your book earlier. I'm sure there's more people like me who just haven't got the chance to find your book. As an avid reader, I can assure you that this book has really got me hooked, and if it does for me, I'm sure it also has enough substance to hook others. It not only contained logic despite having a dose of fantasy, it also shows what looks to be experience, research, and know-hows, which to be honest, a bunch of top lister novels doesn't have. The grammar is top-notch for this website. I can freely read while being lazy, without my brain going into overdrive just to understand something. Unlike others who rely on twists that usually ruins their books, yours is consistent, no rushing of developments, it all feels like a smooth ride. I've read your author's thoughts and saw you feeling the lack of appreciation and losing your drive. I hope you continue to write, I can see success in this book, it just needs to be circulated more, and after reaching hundreds of chapters, it's inevitable that people will find this book and give it a try. Just like I did, I've only gave it a try and now found my new favorite novel in this site.
The world background is frustrating and confusing. Readers will spend a lot of time wondering where the setting is (it’s not explained until pretty far into the story). The most frustrating thing about the story is the knock-offs of existing work. He releases The Halfling (The Hobbit) with Filbo Fabbins (Bilbo Baggins) as the main character. Every non-original song has the song title and lyrics altered in a way that’s disorienting and confusing. I guarantee you most of the readers googled the lyrics to see which song it is. It takes you out of the immersive experience. If you’re going to rip something off, you might as well be honest about it. I don’t know if the author is trying to avoid copyright strikes or whatever, but you can safely reference existing works as long as you properly cite it. Even using lyrics would be fine, it’s considered fair use. The language is stilted. You can tell the author speaks English as a second language. This is far from the worst story on Webnovel though. But…It often comes off as word salad. Especially the chapter titles (it looks like Mad Libs sometimes). The names of the MC and the supporting characters are awful - they’re not memorable in a literary sense. The other thing that bothers me is that this is a novel that requires payment. Given all of the problems with the story, I don’t think this rises to the level of a work requiring payment. I’m not trying to discourage the author. In fact, if he fixes what I suggested, I’d revise the rating to 4.5/5 stars. It’s an interesting premise and can be engaging.