Isumis travels in Ulura with the evolution system

After Isumi's life ended prematurely due to an illness, the goddess of life and death took pity on her and gave her a small present. She sent Isumi to Ulura into the world where monsters and human-like races live. The human-like beings that live in Ulura have the system that helps them become stronger in order to withstand the monsters and animals. The monsters and animals have the evolutionary system with which they can evolve. This is my first novel so I don't quite know how the story will go so bear with me! I will try to write 1 to 2 chapters every week. Note: Please read the tag before reading. - English is not my first language, so there would be grammatical mistakes in this story. - Please give my story a proper review. - I accept a suggestion, but no spam!