First of all I happy for the fact that in just 8 days my novel crossed 1k views so my heartfelt thanks to the readers. And second of all, this is my first original work so it may be lacking here and there, but I have worked really hard for the plot and storyline. So,I want to request the readers to be patient and I promise that the readers won't regret reading this novel. So could you please be my companion on this journey, if yes then please add this story to your collection, and vote for it. Thanking you MayDreamer
The plot was a little common but that's what makes this hard to write, it still managed to stand among the rest and although the delivery might need some improvement, it managed to caught my attention. 💓💓💓
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I have always been a fan of villainess novels and this one is an absolute gem! I’m still on the early chapters but I’m sure it will only get better with every new chapter I’ll be reading :>>
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As a male...I don't really read any romance or reverse harem stories, But still read it anyway, so far, I could say that the novel is good. 1. Writing quality is better than some other originals, with proper grammar and punctuation, well I am not some expert in it. 2. Story is common, there are many other stories on the same theme, but still enjoyable as always.... 3. Character design is good, but can be improved, if you could also add inner thoughts and reactions from other side characters like the Mc. 4. Updating stability is good as well. 5. I can't much say about the World development, since I haven't read the whole chapters yet......but it would be good if author could give atleast some description about the empire and the continent that Mc is living in.....would still give five stars anyway.
I am at CH3. The story so far has been good. There are a few grammatical mistakes (which doesn't really alter the reader from understanding the story, so whatever). It is easy to understand and a great read if you like transmigration with a bit of defying the fate plot.
I looove these villainess born again novels so of course I had to read this! I thought the depiction of the lead was quite realistic at the beginning. The grammar and spelling is a bit off in a few place. However, I think it flows nicely and you can still follow along. Overall I like it :)
Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!
Wow! This story is very intriguing. I was drawn into the book from its description. The narrative technique is easy to understand. Well done author.
The premise for this novel is simply amazing - it alone can carry the story. But even still, the author brings in engaging characters, dialogue, interactions and more. An excellent romance novel, and I love stories in first person. Good work, and keep it up author.
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The synopsis was really attractive to me and I think the author mentioned somewhere that this is their first novel. The story is actually quite good and although I don't usually read a lot of romance novels, I was still interested to know more. However, I am having a big dilemma... I'm shipping her with everyone!!! jsadldsauildshaui The writing style gets better as the story progresses and for some reason, I want to read the original novel that this girl was sent into XD I would definitely recommend this novel!
This is honestly a gem. I loved evry chapter that I was able to read and I could tell that you really put alot of thought in every chapter. I love the plot and all the characters I came across. Overall, I hope you get more recognition for your hardwork. Keep up the amazing work.
The creativity of the author is very, very good. But her grammar is somewhat, hmm. Anyway, it can be fixed and can be learned. Author, please continue writing, we understand that it is your first time, your creativity is bliss for us, your readers.
The story is well written. I don't want to be harsh to the author but there has to be an edit to be made, specifically on grammar and punctuations. I don't want to sound like a feeler here as I am worst than the author. But storywise, this is lit and heartwarming. Wholesome to read in the opening and the story flows well. Characters are also carefully crafted and her creations were splendid! Anyone who reads this review has to read this great artwork. This is a gem to be exact.
I must say, the synopsis is really well written. The first person narrative of the story is really well-done and intriguing. Female lead's personality is really likable. Her parents are also likable. And I liked the fact that every emotion was explained. The story progression is neither slow nor too fast. It's perfectly paced. Added it to my library~ Good writing and best of luck. It is really well-written for a first novel!~
i really hope this gets an anime adaptation, I haven't read the hole plot yet but i loved the story so far. I am a huge fan of reincarnation novels so this goes straight into my collections. i highly recommend it , its definitely worth your time.
This was a great read. I enjoyed the way you described your characters, and each dialogue was clear and It does add charm to the novel. This book has really great potential, Good luck author. Keep it up.
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