MayDreamer
First of all I happy for the fact that in just 8 days my novel crossed 1k views so my heartfelt thanks to the readers. And second of all, this is my first original work so it may be lacking here and there, but I have worked really hard for the plot and storyline. So,I want to request the readers to be patient and I promise that the readers won't regret reading this novel. So could you please be my companion on this journey, if yes then please add this story to your collection, and vote for it. Thanking you MayDreamer
As a male...I don't really read any romance or reverse harem stories, But still read it anyway, so far, I could say that the novel is good. 1. Writing quality is better than some other originals, with proper grammar and punctuation, well I am not some expert in it. 2. Story is common, there are many other stories on the same theme, but still enjoyable as always.... 3. Character design is good, but can be improved, if you could also add inner thoughts and reactions from other side characters like the Mc. 4. Updating stability is good as well. 5. I can't much say about the World development, since I haven't read the whole chapters yet......but it would be good if author could give atleast some description about the empire and the continent that Mc is living in.....would still give five stars anyway.
The synopsis was really attractive to me and I think the author mentioned somewhere that this is their first novel. The story is actually quite good and although I don't usually read a lot of romance novels, I was still interested to know more. However, I am having a big dilemma... I'm shipping her with everyone!!! jsadldsauildshaui The writing style gets better as the story progresses and for some reason, I want to read the original novel that this girl was sent into XD I would definitely recommend this novel!
The story is well written. I don't want to be harsh to the author but there has to be an edit to be made, specifically on grammar and punctuations. I don't want to sound like a feeler here as I am worst than the author. But storywise, this is lit and heartwarming. Wholesome to read in the opening and the story flows well. Characters are also carefully crafted and her creations were splendid! Anyone who reads this review has to read this great artwork. This is a gem to be exact.
I must say, the synopsis is really well written. The first person narrative of the story is really well-done and intriguing. Female lead's personality is really likable. Her parents are also likable. And I liked the fact that every emotion was explained. The story progression is neither slow nor too fast. It's perfectly paced. Added it to my library~ Good writing and best of luck. It is really well-written for a first novel!~